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Array ( [sid] => 142573 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Moon Dreams [time] => 2008-05-22 10:29:38 [hometext] => For what the sun gives the moon takes away sealing the world into the other side of the looking glass.... [bodytext] => -------______----------

If you step outside into the crystal midnight air
you can feel the moonlight dancing across your skin.
As it lights the world below with its hues of pale white
it cools everything it touches making the very air around us
seem to leap away from our faces
and hide in the shadows for safety.

One has to wonder how any reflection of the sun
can be so cruel and dim
lighting as much as it obscures
and cooling as much as it warms.

For what the sun gives
the moon takes away
sealing the world into the other side of the looking glass
leaving the earth frozen and barren
but beautiful all the same.

For when I feel the moon strike me
with it痴 pale rays of ice
though it brings no warmth or comfort
nonetheless it brings me life.

I know I知 trapped in the looking glass.
Just looking back at life itself
like the moonlight stretching across the earth
I知 cold and lifeless
but perhaps beautiful all the same.

So if you enjoy my moonlight
as it dances across your skin
perhaps you値l share kind words
with a face trapped in the looking glass
just trying to stay warm in the crystal midnight air. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 281 [topic] => 40 [informant] => MajesticPoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )
Moon Dreams

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 10:29:38 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



-------______----------

If you step outside into the crystal midnight air
you can feel the moonlight dancing across your skin.
As it lights the world below with its hues of pale white
it cools everything it touches making the very air around us
seem to leap away from our faces
and hide in the shadows for safety.

One has to wonder how any reflection of the sun
can be so cruel and dim
lighting as much as it obscures
and cooling as much as it warms.

For what the sun gives
the moon takes away
sealing the world into the other side of the looking glass
leaving the earth frozen and barren
but beautiful all the same.

For when I feel the moon strike me
with it痴 pale rays of ice
though it brings no warmth or comfort
nonetheless it brings me life.

I know I知 trapped in the looking glass.
Just looking back at life itself
like the moonlight stretching across the earth
I知 cold and lifeless
but perhaps beautiful all the same.

So if you enjoy my moonlight
as it dances across your skin
perhaps you値l share kind words
with a face trapped in the looking glass
just trying to stay warm in the crystal midnight air.




Copyright ツゥ MajesticPoet ... [ 2008-05-22 10:29:38]
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Re: Moon Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 10:36:42 AM AEST
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A very beautiful write, Maj... I loved it... Jenni


Re: Moon Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 10:48:07 AM AEST
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Ah yes I enjoy your moonlight , I love the night and the moon and my friend I love this write...... Makes me smile. Pen on pen on........

Hugs

Michelle


Re: Moon Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 12:17:52 PM AEST
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Wonerful write. It gave me a different perspective on night.

Mike


Re: Moon Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Starchild7 on Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 01:22:25 AM AEST
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Very beautifully written and quite enchanting, thank you.
Starchild


Re: Moon Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Starchild7 on Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 01:22:27 AM AEST
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Very beautifully written and quite enchanting, thank you.
Starchild




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