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Array ( [sid] => 142530 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please Don't mind my attitude [time] => 2008-05-21 05:50:09 [hometext] => A song i wrote that can be converted to poetry, simple but oh so real. Universal really. Check it out, Feel free to comment [bodytext] => Check it, check it
Please don’t mind my attitude
Sorry if I’m being rude
But I, I got something to say to you
When I’m with you my skies are blue
And when I’m not its damp and Grey
You know I, can’t stand to live another day
Living my life out through this way
I kept silent now I’ve got to say girl
You left me here with bills to pay
never thought it would end up this way
When we, first met and our love was so new
didn’t know much bout love but knew ours had to be true
But that’s all over you see
the moment you walked out on me
As you went out couldn’t help but to look back
thinking of you substitutes for the love I lack
I really do want you back
Plus your what they call a demon in the sack ;)
Everything that a man could possibly want
and you love my music so baby don’t you front
yes we were a perfect match
A real nice 1, 2 Punch,
Like 2 magnets the way we attached
Then one day you got your panties all in a bunch
But the Good will outweigh the bad
and the happy will subdue the sad
Don’t act like you forgot about what we had
I know deep down inside theirs still some love for Chad
And I’m a real special guy
that’s what I wanna be so I try
When you reflect on your past it aint hard to see
you will never meet another man who can stack up to me.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 24 [informant] => J-A-X [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
Please Don't mind my attitude

Contributed by J-A-X on Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 05:50:09 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



Check it, check it
Please don’t mind my attitude
Sorry if I’m being rude
But I, I got something to say to you
When I’m with you my skies are blue
And when I’m not its damp and Grey
You know I, can’t stand to live another day
Living my life out through this way
I kept silent now I’ve got to say girl
You left me here with bills to pay
never thought it would end up this way
When we, first met and our love was so new
didn’t know much bout love but knew ours had to be true
But that’s all over you see
the moment you walked out on me
As you went out couldn’t help but to look back
thinking of you substitutes for the love I lack
I really do want you back
Plus your what they call a demon in the sack ;)
Everything that a man could possibly want
and you love my music so baby don’t you front
yes we were a perfect match
A real nice 1, 2 Punch,
Like 2 magnets the way we attached
Then one day you got your panties all in a bunch
But the Good will outweigh the bad
and the happy will subdue the sad
Don’t act like you forgot about what we had
I know deep down inside theirs still some love for Chad
And I’m a real special guy
that’s what I wanna be so I try
When you reflect on your past it aint hard to see
you will never meet another man who can stack up to me.




Copyright © J-A-X ... [ 2008-05-21 05:50:09]
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Re: Please Don't mind my attitude (User Rating: 1 )
by Muinanyere on Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 06:35:59 AM AEST
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Very nice I liked it a lot


Re: Please Don't mind my attitude (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 09:35:08 AM AEST
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I would like to hear the music with it.
Loved the ending too.

Two thumbs up

hugs
Michelle




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