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Array ( [sid] => 142510 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mummy, Why?? [time] => 2008-05-20 10:23:35 [hometext] => Mummy, why can’t you open your eyes, and see what he does to me? [bodytext] => ~~xXx~~

Mummy, why won’t you listen
To what I have to say?
Why do you always tell me
That Daddy just wants to play.

Mummy, why can’t you understand.
I do not like his game.
Each time he is done with me,
I’m always filled with shame.

Mummy, why can’t you open your eyes,
and see what he does to me?
Is it that you don’t really care,
Or that you just don’t want to see?

Mummy, when will you realize
What I am saying is all true.
Would you finally believe me
When I’m all black and blue?

Mummy, why won’t you help me?
Together we can form a plan.
I wish my real Daddy was still alive.
He’d surely protect me from this man.

~~xXx~~

17th Nov. 2002 [comments] => 10 [counter] => 336 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Jenni_K [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Mummy, Why??

Contributed by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 10:23:35 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

~~xXx~~

Mummy, why won’t you listen
To what I have to say?
Why do you always tell me
That Daddy just wants to play.

Mummy, why can’t you understand.
I do not like his game.
Each time he is done with me,
I’m always filled with shame.

Mummy, why can’t you open your eyes,
and see what he does to me?
Is it that you don’t really care,
Or that you just don’t want to see?

Mummy, when will you realize
What I am saying is all true.
Would you finally believe me
When I’m all black and blue?

Mummy, why won’t you help me?
Together we can form a plan.
I wish my real Daddy was still alive.
He’d surely protect me from this man.

~~xXx~~

17th Nov. 2002

Copyright Â© Jenni_K ... [ 2008-05-20 10:23:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Mummy, Why?? (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 11:28:31 AM AEST
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Oh this really struck a nerve. Heartbreaking write.

Michelle

Re: Mummy, Why?? (User Rating: 1 )
by Eclipse_of_the_Moon on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 12:16:35 PM AEST
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omg....this really made me cry... very heartbreaking

Lexie

Re: Mummy, Why?? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 02:13:29 PM AEST
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Incredible written even in the sadness.
awesome work, girlfriend.
peace, joy, luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Mummy, Why?? (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 12:30:15 AM AEST
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Your words are great encouragement to me.

Re: Mummy, Why?? (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 02:39:36 AM AEST
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Jenni,

I sincerely hope that this is nothing more than that...just a write.

And that this is in no way, connected to any portion of your life. For if it is, I am truly sad, and sorry.

You have exquisitely expressed, this truly heartbreaking and unfortunate situation.

Prays for you.

~Stephan

Re: Mummy, Why?? (User Rating: 1 )
by lozzalovesu on Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 01:40:45 PM AEST
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i love your work all of your poetry if fantastic

Re: Mummy, Why?? (User Rating: 1 )
by lozzalovesu on Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 01:43:31 PM AEST
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i totally understand wat this poem is sayin having a violent past myself this poen is amazing and tells the truth about wat goes on behind closed doors
loved it

Re: Mummy, Why?? (User Rating: 1 )
by maggot on Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 02:56:39 PM AEST
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this is so sad and emotional
realy tuggeed at my heart strings

*hugs*
take care
~maggot~

Re: Mummy, Why?? (User Rating: 1 )
by Debi-x3 on Saturday, 2nd August 2008 @ 09:49:39 AM AEST
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Really effictive writing .. Well Done !

Debi x3

Re: Mummy, Why?? (User Rating: 1 )
by roxie on Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 06:02:01 PM AEST
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no one deserves this pain i cant believe how blind people can be i fell your pain so strong its not even funny i'm so angry your mom needs to open her eyes and realize she's ganna lose you if she don't put a stop to this!!!! you r in my heart and prayers stay strong n keep your head high u r beautiful oxoxox roxie!!!

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