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Array ( [sid] => 142501 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The fourth letter from you [time] => 2008-05-20 00:43:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The fourth letter from you

After a week,

I was reading the fourth letter from you.

You told me you missed me very much specially at night,

you were very busy every day,

you always got up with the lark to make the most of every single day,

because you hoped you would be able to return earlier.

" Do you know?

sometimes I even thought to give up the job."

The main points of the letter,

was told that in need you had to stay longer,

I could see your expression when you asked for my forgiving:

" Well,

first of all I can't possibly spare the time.

Believe me,

I am serious,

I can't mean it as a joke."

Since my father's death,

I had gone through many things in trouble,

so I knew the life's not all beer and skittles.

I wrote back to you:

" Don't worry about me.

These days,

my reading much develops my knowledge,

so I am rich.

I still remember you told me that good books are an enrichment of life."

I also told you,

I was ready to share your whole life,

I hoped you would let me know if you have any trouble:

" Remember,

we both share one happiness,

the happiness will be double.

we both share one sorrow,

the sorrow will become half."

Yes,

sharing happiness is double happiness

and sharing sorrow is half sorrw

When I had to kiss you to say good night,

I sang a my favorite song passionately:

"Oceans apart day after day,

and I slowly go insane.

I hear your voice on the line,

but it doesn't stop the pain.

If I see you next to never,

how can we say forever.

Wherever you go,

whatever you do,

I will be right here waiting for you.

Whatever it takes,

or how my heart breaks,

I will be right here waiting for you."

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The fourth letter from you

Contributed by holy on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 12:43:07 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The fourth letter from you

After a week,

I was reading the fourth letter from you.

You told me you missed me very much specially at night,

you were very busy every day,

you always got up with the lark to make the most of every single day,

because you hoped you would be able to return earlier.

" Do you know?

sometimes I even thought to give up the job."

The main points of the letter,

was told that in need you had to stay longer,

I could see your expression when you asked for my forgiving:

" Well,

first of all I can't possibly spare the time.

Believe me,

I am serious,

I can't mean it as a joke."

Since my father's death,

I had gone through many things in trouble,

so I knew the life's not all beer and skittles.

I wrote back to you:

" Don't worry about me.

These days,

my reading much develops my knowledge,

so I am rich.

I still remember you told me that good books are an enrichment of life."

I also told you,

I was ready to share your whole life,

I hoped you would let me know if you have any trouble:

" Remember,

we both share one happiness,

the happiness will be double.

we both share one sorrow,

the sorrow will become half."

Yes,

sharing happiness is double happiness

and sharing sorrow is half sorrw

When I had to kiss you to say good night,

I sang a my favorite song passionately:

"Oceans apart day after day,

and I slowly go insane.

I hear your voice on the line,

but it doesn't stop the pain.

If I see you next to never,

how can we say forever.

Wherever you go,

whatever you do,

I will be right here waiting for you.

Whatever it takes,

or how my heart breaks,

I will be right here waiting for you."

Copyright © holy ... [ 2008-05-20 00:43:07]
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Re: The fourth letter from you (User Rating: 1 )
by vampyrekiss on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 02:54:37 AM AEST
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great write i liked the style was a bit different but i love it keep it up

Re: The fourth letter from you (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 06:38:20 AM AEST
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I really like the song you quoted here, I found the style of this pretty interesting and unique on the site somewhat. Good work.

Re: The fourth letter from you (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 07:41:43 AM AEST
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You are getting better and better with each write, Holy... Keep it up... This was really pretty....
Jenni

Re: The fourth letter from you (User Rating: 1 )
by Muinanyere on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 08:00:03 AM AEST
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This is very beautiful, I liked the song too.

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