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Drops of diamonds glittering bright
Shattering the darkness, glimmering white

Leaving trails of sparkling brilliance
Setting its sails in a soft resilience

Quiet as paintings under darkened skies
A shivering beauty in silent cries

Drops of diamonds setting off streaks
Drops of diamonds running down your cheeks

***
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Diamond Drops

Contributed by Opium on Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 09:57:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

***

Drops of diamonds glittering bright
Shattering the darkness, glimmering white

Leaving trails of sparkling brilliance
Setting its sails in a soft resilience

Quiet as paintings under darkened skies
A shivering beauty in silent cries

Drops of diamonds setting off streaks
Drops of diamonds running down your cheeks

***

Copyright © Opium ... [ 2008-05-19 21:57:58]
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Re: Diamond Drops (User Rating: 1 )
by Strawberry on Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 10:36:54 PM AEST
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pretty
a very nice read
=]

Re: Diamond Drops (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 12:48:15 AM AEST
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This was a lovely write, i love how you never actually mentioned what you were pertaining to, the stars are a source of infinite
inspiration and wonder and your take on them is short sweet and written with a perfect flow, the last verse was brilliant!!
well done!! keep it up

Re: Diamond Drops (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 06:43:10 AM AEST
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I really liked the rhythm of your rhymes here, they flowed very evenly and added to the beauty of this poem. Good work.

Re: Diamond Drops (User Rating: 1 )
by ribbons_and_lace09 on Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 05:22:40 AM AEST
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very good. =) i like the way it flows together. it's really cool. i found myself adding a rhythm to it as i was reading it. =)
always,
megan

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