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Death and Rebirth
Contributed by
roddy
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Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 02:22:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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On the lighter side of suffering
The calm after the storm
The genesis of my rebirth
Homely and agonized I felt
Now high with unrelenting strength
Domination over my soul
This is my revolution
My body's private war
Anarchy against what was inside
Death of the defeatist lifestyle
Life to optimism and trust
Copyright ©
roddy
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2008-05-18 14:22:41]
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Re: Death and Rebirth
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by emystar on
Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 02:41:40 PM AEST
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Wow, you need to put this on a plack so folks can bye it -n-hang it on their wall.
Awesome masterpeice.
huggs,
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Re: Death and Rebirth
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 02:53:46 PM AEST
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| A pleasant read, I enjoy reading pieces with this theme. Nice job. |
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Re: Death and Rebirth
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by Spike on
Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 05:18:17 PM AEST
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A good eg of the internal struggle for most complex and inevitably, neurotic beings. Lots of very familiar aspects in this one - tension that's becoming less a war and more a set of civilized skirmishes as I get older. I really enjoyed the optimistic perpsective/outcome as well as the general structure and expression. Insightful and a good read.
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Re: Death and Rebirth
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 12:34:02 AM AEST
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oh, I really like this one. A very favourable and beautiful reveal. I think
a lot of us go through a similar struggle which makes this piece so enormous.
The last three lines really shed a perfectly positive feeling and gives
the reader inspiration. Well done. A very enjoyable read.
:)
~Breezy
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