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Array ( [sid] => 142378 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Just Breath~ [time] => 2008-05-14 14:32:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The wind
sings their song
long ago a love so far away
the scent of her
sweet like lilacs
blessed by rain
in the month of May.

Golden leaves
summers last breath
she thought she saw him
walking through the park.
Couldn't be
her eyes played tricks
another leaf falls.

Crystal flakes
fall let go
he saw her reflection
in the partly iced over pond
was it really her
or was it just a brief thought?

Like a dream
lost in thought
floating with the clouds
puffed white cotton
and it is gone
one last moment
one last tender thought

Just breath...........

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~Just Breath~

Contributed by shelby on Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 02:32:27 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The wind
sings their song
long ago a love so far away
the scent of her
sweet like lilacs
blessed by rain
in the month of May.

Golden leaves
summers last breath
she thought she saw him
walking through the park.
Couldn't be
her eyes played tricks
another leaf falls.

Crystal flakes
fall let go
he saw her reflection
in the partly iced over pond
was it really her
or was it just a brief thought?

Like a dream
lost in thought
floating with the clouds
puffed white cotton
and it is gone
one last moment
one last tender thought

Just breath...........

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2008-05-14 14:32:27]
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Re: ~Just Breath~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 02:36:36 PM AEST
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another bad-ass write my friend..and we do reflect on our lives and the people in it, and the people that have gone. Vincent

Re: ~Just Breath~ (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 03:16:09 PM AEST
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Beautifull.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: ~Just Breath~ (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 03:23:26 PM AEST
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Nice Michelle

I really enjoyed the imagery in this.

Peace

~Shannon

Re: ~Just Breath~ (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Thursday, 15th May 2008 @ 02:34:22 AM AEST
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This is a stunning write, i could feel the that momentary hope in seeing someone iv not for ages, i almost floated through this peice such was the soft and measured flow, like a passing dream with great word usage, overall a brilliant write, loved the last line also!!!

keep it up!

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