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Array ( [sid] => 142366 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The vampire [time] => 2008-05-14 08:40:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I do pity the naive souls
which have forced upon them
the tick tock of humanity
or as i like to put it
the never ending cycle of a caged animal,
however for me the hand of miss luck
has placed itself on my shoulder
to remove these limitations,
not as simple as it sounds my friend
from this point on
you must remove your own humanity
as to suffer from the question
kill or kill yourself
is a long and painful road,
you must free yourself
and become what you really are,
open your soul.

I am now naked
true
and blessed,
no longer have i the boundaries
of the human psyche
restricting me from myself,
instead i am free
to be my natural self
ever wondered who you really are?
i do not anymore
as i am the evolution of mankind
the next in line
a resultant of the merger
of the Ego the Super ego and the Id,
an ascended being
a vampire. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 43 [informant] => HellRaiser [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

The vampire

Contributed by HellRaiser on Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 08:40:27 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I do pity the naive souls
which have forced upon them
the tick tock of humanity
or as i like to put it
the never ending cycle of a caged animal,
however for me the hand of miss luck
has placed itself on my shoulder
to remove these limitations,
not as simple as it sounds my friend
from this point on
you must remove your own humanity
as to suffer from the question
kill or kill yourself
is a long and painful road,
you must free yourself
and become what you really are,
open your soul.

I am now naked
true
and blessed,
no longer have i the boundaries
of the human psyche
restricting me from myself,
instead i am free
to be my natural self
ever wondered who you really are?
i do not anymore
as i am the evolution of mankind
the next in line
a resultant of the merger
of the Ego the Super ego and the Id,
an ascended being
a vampire.

Copyright © HellRaiser ... [ 2008-05-14 08:40:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The vampire (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 08:44:33 AM AEST
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This is awesome...... I like the concept of entire write.

Michelle

Re: The vampire (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 11:38:12 AM AEST
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oh my gosh. this is cool! i love the word choice, the concept, the flow, everything!

Re: The vampire (User Rating: 1 )
by ReasyPieces on Tuesday, 24th January 2012 @ 09:30:08 AM AEST
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awesome poem, very creative and detailed, i love it! :)

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