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I look at you, thinking of what to say.

you close the distance between us

to stand in front of me.

you tell me my eyes look like an open sea.

Your Hazel eyes are filled with love

a treasure sent from above.

that nothing can ever replace.

You put your hands around my face,

and kiss me gently with no haste.

a kiss I will never ever waste.

Your Hazel eyes smile at me

blinding me so I can't see

drowning in this love you give to me

and you tell me, hearts are the key.

Your Hazel eyes are filled with warmth

cloaking me in a blanket so warm

so that when you leave I shiver from the cold.

but you said, you'll be with me till I'm old

Your Hazel eyes turn my way [comments] => 6 [counter] => 5576 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Eclipse_of_the_Moon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Hazel Eyes

Contributed by Eclipse_of_the_Moon on Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 01:07:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Your Hazel eyes turn my way

I look at you, thinking of what to say.

you close the distance between us

to stand in front of me.

you tell me my eyes look like an open sea.

Your Hazel eyes are filled with love

a treasure sent from above.

that nothing can ever replace.

You put your hands around my face,

and kiss me gently with no haste.

a kiss I will never ever waste.

Your Hazel eyes smile at me

blinding me so I can't see

drowning in this love you give to me

and you tell me, hearts are the key.

Your Hazel eyes are filled with warmth

cloaking me in a blanket so warm

so that when you leave I shiver from the cold.

but you said, you'll be with me till I'm old

Your Hazel eyes turn my way

Copyright © Eclipse_of_the_Moon ... [ 2008-05-13 13:07:43]
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Re: Hazel Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by TundraHydra on Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 01:14:08 PM AEST
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ok I admit I hugged myself when I read this but only cause I couldnt hug you right now

Re: Hazel Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 01:20:47 PM AEST
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I loved the sweet innocence in this write lovely work.

Michelle

Re: Hazel Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 01:55:26 PM AEST
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yeah really like this! a fitting and lovley dedication to a fiance, easy too read and very honest!! well done

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