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The angel of his salvation, his lost souls starvation.
He lives the lie longing for someone who will not be.
He chases a ghost of his lost reality, she..... no angel at all.

Oh angel dreamer close your eyes once more.
She carries no wings she is nothing more
than a temptation luring you away from your moral thoughts.
You shall one day awaken in a bed of old dead thorns.

Caught between your split worlds and two sided personalities.
Living in your curse of unfilled fantasies.
You see her face once more, in that demon sky.
Hearing her voice on a springs humble lullaby.

Oh angel dreamer close your eyes once more.
She carries no wings she is nothing more
than a temptation luring you away from your mortal thoughts.
You shall one day awaken in a bed of old dead thorns.

The bed in which you made.......... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 13 [informant] => shelby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

~Angel Dreamer~

Contributed by shelby on Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 11:56:35 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

In the sky of deadly eve is where he looks for her.
The angel of his salvation, his lost souls starvation.
He lives the lie longing for someone who will not be.
He chases a ghost of his lost reality, she..... no angel at all.

Oh angel dreamer close your eyes once more.
She carries no wings she is nothing more
than a temptation luring you away from your moral thoughts.
You shall one day awaken in a bed of old dead thorns.

Caught between your split worlds and two sided personalities.
Living in your curse of unfilled fantasies.
You see her face once more, in that demon sky.
Hearing her voice on a springs humble lullaby.

Oh angel dreamer close your eyes once more.
She carries no wings she is nothing more
than a temptation luring you away from your mortal thoughts.
You shall one day awaken in a bed of old dead thorns.

The bed in which you made..........

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2008-05-13 11:56:35]
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Re: ~Angel Dreamer~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 12:26:58 PM AEST
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Wow grrlfriend..... nicely done... Quite a tease isn't she....
Thanks for your lovely comments.....
Jenni

Re: ~Angel Dreamer~ (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 01:32:48 PM AEST
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Nice write here, real well done!!! i could easily feel the temptress dwelling in these lines, there was an almost lyrical quality to alot of it, like a forboding elegy or something,
great piece!!! keep it up.

zenith66

Re: ~Angel Dreamer~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 02:57:06 PM AEST
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As we sit in our robes at our desks we all agree that this is an outstanding work of art. So perfectly crafted and so bold. In honour of this art we tie one of the Ghost Alarms (the one who is always slightly different than the rest of us....the one we refer to as Chub Alarm) to a swing and then spin him around. Eventually we begin chasing him. The swing is set on an hour timer at going at a rate that is impossible to catch. We try in vain to catch him as he is screaming (let me down you morons!) while he swings through the air with the greatest of ease. Eventually we tire and stop. Now we are dizzy, and we run into one another each falling on top of another. This was another botched experiment but we learn one thing in this experiment that we learn in your write. Chasing a ghost, or a ghost alarm can lead to lumps in the head or beds of thorns. Ghosts are created to let go, and they do not haunt unless we allow them to remain a part of the living world.

Kudos to you Shelby on your fascinating write. We are exceptionally pleased as always. That is many pleases of exception for we are many.

May a giant ghost horse fly buzz around your head today until he becomes dizzy and stings you with fear.

The Ghost Alarms 08

Re: ~Angel Dreamer~ (User Rating: 1 )
by safetyinnumbers on Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 12:46:24 AM AEST
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Nicely done....I thought your poem was really good, I can relate to it in my own life and for that reason it makes it even more stronger....Nice work...

Extra note: The above comments from GhostAlarms made me laugh....you guys are so entertaining and funny!!! : )

Re: ~Angel Dreamer~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 6th July 2013 @ 02:42:45 AM AEST
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Geeze, you've got 437 poems posted! Wows!

Ooooooo...love this poem.

You shall one day awaken in a bed of old dead thorns.

OUCH!

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