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Tongue like a whip with nine tails
Words of anger and pain from her mouth lash out
Her place among demons, an eternity in Hell has been set
Every act of love and kindness, every attempt fails
Every past transgression, a million times has come about

She flies upon the wings of devils instead of those of a dove
Her feelings she has locked away in one of Hell’s tall spires
She walks among the shadows to stay away from the light
She deals in pain, making you wish for death in order to feel love
In her eyes the purest darkness in which burns eternal fires
Except for the flames in her eyes everything else is kept from your sight

The purest form of evil to ever be born upon this earth
A shattered heart, a tortured soul brings her the greatest joy
Feeding upon your deepest and darkest fears
The most sinister creature to come forth from the loins of man since man-kind’s birth
To lure in her prey, to the world she plays coy
Preferring the taste of your blood over that of your tears

The Angel of Death brings with it a welcome release
Escape from Hell, everlasting peace

2007
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Mistress of Mine, With You Hell Have You Wrought

Contributed by ingeniusidiot on Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 09:42:07 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Eyes of scarlet
Tongue like a whip with nine tails
Words of anger and pain from her mouth lash out
Her place among demons, an eternity in Hell has been set
Every act of love and kindness, every attempt fails
Every past transgression, a million times has come about

She flies upon the wings of devils instead of those of a dove
Her feelings she has locked away in one of Hell’s tall spires
She walks among the shadows to stay away from the light
She deals in pain, making you wish for death in order to feel love
In her eyes the purest darkness in which burns eternal fires
Except for the flames in her eyes everything else is kept from your sight

The purest form of evil to ever be born upon this earth
A shattered heart, a tortured soul brings her the greatest joy
Feeding upon your deepest and darkest fears
The most sinister creature to come forth from the loins of man since man-kind’s birth
To lure in her prey, to the world she plays coy
Preferring the taste of your blood over that of your tears

The Angel of Death brings with it a welcome release
Escape from Hell, everlasting peace

2007




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Re: Mistress of Mine, With You Hell Have You Wrought (User Rating: 1 )
by satanssecret1369 on Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 03:37:47 PM AEST
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Wow. Speechless... I must go back and read this again...

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Re: Mistress of Mine, With You Hell Have You Wrought (User Rating: 1 )
by safetyinnumbers on Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 10:53:52 AM AEST
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I liked this poem......it reminds me of a poem I wrote a couple years back, it's similar in theme to your poem, but nowhere near the darkness......Good work. I thought I might share with you one of the stanzas from that poem.....

Her eternal eyes slide on the dark side
And slowly consume everything in sight
They are cold and without love tonight
And wish for all that breathes to die


Re: Mistress of Mine, With You Hell Have You Wrought (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 12th February 2019 @ 02:15:27 PM AEST
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Wow...This is how it all started?
Phenomenally written. Dark but based on reality mostly. I wonder if anyone here reads?
I know the type and evil does walk the earth.
I wish I was an idiot......Wow again.




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