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[title] => When Verse Takes Affect (And)
[time] => 2008-05-12 17:46:10
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[bodytext] => When Verse Takes Affect There’s a song hanging in me but it’s going to be written for you, and somehow that isn’t fair but it’s the only way to get it through. So go ahead and steal what little I could reveal with my words of all this collected vocabulary that I heard. It goes car rides, white lies and giant shimmering eyes blue like a moon I’ve never seen. And one blanket to two bodies tucked away and tight in a trance between what’s real and a dream. These are the things I learned were beautiful when verse takes affect and presses us to be metrical. Love me originally in a he say cliché, take what its worth which is measureless. I guess what’s best is wishing you were lucky but coming up to find you’re only blessed. What a funny way to look at something so serious it amounts to nothing. And maybe someone other than you could relate to the same four lines I’ve always used, mixed around and fixed in a feverish pace perplexed and punned from being renewed. As if all the thoughts I thought I had were everyone else’s thoughts instead. Because these are the things I learned were beautiful when verse takes affect and presses us to be metrical. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 73 [informant] => Desideratum [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
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