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Array ( [sid] => 142269 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Demon [time] => 2008-05-10 07:54:39 [hometext] => This is the first song I've ever tried to write...please tell me what you think. [bodytext] => No one sees how close I am to saying good-bye.
All those words I wanted to hear were just a lie.
If I ever trust again,
I swear I'll regret it.

There's a demon inside of me,
eating me away.
There's a demon inside of me,
taking me apart.

I'm so sick of trust you,
thinking that you will change.
To think about how close we were...
It's a thorn in my side.

There's a demon inside of me,
eating me away.
There's a demon inside of me,
tearing me apart.

I wonder if you will change.
I can't help you
if you refuse to be helped.
I can't help you
if you won't let me in.

There's a demon inside of me,
eating me away.
There's a demon inside of me,
ripping me apart.

You do such stupid things.
It hurts to watch as you destroy yourself.
I want to help,
to make things better for you.
But I can't.
You won't let me.

There's a demon inside of me,
eating me away.
There's a demon inside of me,
tearing out my heart.
There's a demon inside of me.
(inside of me)
There's a demon inside of me.
(inside of me)
And I want it out!

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A Demon

Contributed by xoBrokenxo on Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 07:54:39 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



No one sees how close I am to saying good-bye.
All those words I wanted to hear were just a lie.
If I ever trust again,
I swear I'll regret it.

There's a demon inside of me,
eating me away.
There's a demon inside of me,
taking me apart.

I'm so sick of trust you,
thinking that you will change.
To think about how close we were...
It's a thorn in my side.

There's a demon inside of me,
eating me away.
There's a demon inside of me,
tearing me apart.

I wonder if you will change.
I can't help you
if you refuse to be helped.
I can't help you
if you won't let me in.

There's a demon inside of me,
eating me away.
There's a demon inside of me,
ripping me apart.

You do such stupid things.
It hurts to watch as you destroy yourself.
I want to help,
to make things better for you.
But I can't.
You won't let me.

There's a demon inside of me,
eating me away.
There's a demon inside of me,
tearing out my heart.
There's a demon inside of me.
(inside of me)
There's a demon inside of me.
(inside of me)
And I want it out!





Copyright © xoBrokenxo ... [ 2008-05-10 07:54:39]
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Re: A Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by Cupid on Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 12:31:49 PM AEST
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I think I've seen and felt this same demon.
It lurks around each corner, waiting for you to make that one fatal mistake that will send you falling into a dark and endless abyss for all eternity.
I love this song of yours! It seems you know how to express yourself well!
Keep up the good work, my friend!


Re: A Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by Arijadna77 on Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 09:33:33 PM AEST
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Supersonic.


Re: A Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Thursday, 12th November 2009 @ 06:38:21 AM AEST
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Think we all have that Demon. it's trying to control it before it controls us.




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