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Wait for tommarow to disappear,
until all of your tommarows are gone.
Scared to try, to commit to something that
the sun always seems to set on

Why do people keep walking in pretending to be blind?
They don't know!
But then again neither do I.

Whatever! I just keep telling myself it's worth it.
I'ts not like he isn't perfect,
I'ts more like my heart is already breaking

The fun is just begining,
I'm tourturing myself.
Until the sun rises,
it will be the most fun i've ever had.
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Until the sun rises

Contributed by xmorbid6childrnx on Thursday, 8th May 2008 @ 10:18:57 PM in AEST
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Wait for tommarow to disappear,
until all of your tommarows are gone.
Scared to try, to commit to something that
the sun always seems to set on

Why do people keep walking in pretending to be blind?
They don't know!
But then again neither do I.

Whatever! I just keep telling myself it's worth it.
I'ts not like he isn't perfect,
I'ts more like my heart is already breaking

The fun is just begining,
I'm tourturing myself.
Until the sun rises,
it will be the most fun i've ever had.

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Re: Until the sun rises (User Rating: 1 )
by LittleMissWonderful on Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 03:17:51 AM AEST
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I don't know what is going on in your mind, but I do know that this poem sounds very much like thoughts that are similar to my own. It is a decent poem, keep writing, and remember... you are never alone in your feelings. There will always be someone in the world who has gone through the same spectrum of emotion. I hope that is of some comfort to you.
"Why do people keep walking in pretending to be blind?" -Because people have an instinctual fear of the truth.

"They don't know! But then again neither do I."

None of us has quite figured it out, and there are many men that have spent lifetimes trying to.

Take it as you will. I hope I helped out some.

Re: Until the sun rises (User Rating: 1 )
by SilverRain on Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 06:35:24 AM AEST
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A thought provoking piece. Loved the first part of your poem. Keep them coming.

Re: Until the sun rises (User Rating: 1 )
by forgotten_poet on Sunday, 11th May 2008 @ 03:21:33 PM AEST
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i really liked the first part

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