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[sid] => 14223
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[aid] => Mick
[title] => A Message To A Jerk
[time] => 2003-03-13 15:00:00
[hometext] => I wrote this for a guy who was poisoned by his girlfriend to hate me.
[bodytext] => You don't even know me,
But seem to think I'm mad,
All because you listen to things,
That make your mind so black,
Is this what you call true love,
To decay another's name,
To live for her expectations,
And to play her stupid game,
You've been so corrupted,
In every single way,
Get a life, start it over,
Thats all I bear to say.
[comments] => 12
[counter] => 286
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[informant] => blueheart
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[alanguage] => english
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[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 10
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => AngryPoetry
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A Message To A Jerk
Contributed by
blueheart
on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You don't even know me,
But seem to think I'm mad,
All because you listen to things,
That make your mind so black,
Is this what you call true love,
To decay another's name,
To live for her expectations,
And to play her stupid game,
You've been so corrupted,
In every single way,
Get a life, start it over,
Thats all I bear to say.
Copyright ©
blueheart
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2003-03-13 15:00:00]
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Re: A Message To A Jerk
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by SmokinJoeEvil on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 05:03:42 PM AEST
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| If you are female, perhaps she felt threatened by you in some way... perhaps by some action you had taken with or toward her boyfriend. Jealousy is a very common emotion. Or perhaps, against your will and outside your knowledge, you yourself turned this man off in some way... at any rate, you sound like you are very concerned with the fact that he wants nothing to do with you. Perhaps there is more to your side of the story than you are willing to admit. |
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Re: A Message To A Jerk
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 10:07:16 PM AEST
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| wow! this is great, so many times people do not see beyond their own experience, too quick to judge another, great write here:) huggs n' love to you, nessa |
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Re: A Message To A Jerk
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 11:10:25 AM AEST
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| good write so many times people don't look at the person within and get to know them..everyone has beauty somewhere within them..it's our place to look for it. |
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Re: A Message To A Jerk
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by Ronald on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 04:18:28 AM AEST
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| Well, i guess some people just do things according to their emotion and try to hurt you but I hope you will deal with your hurt wisely. Anyway, good write! |
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Re: A Message To A Jerk
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 06:12:44 AM AEST
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Terrific! Wow! Blistering!
I'd certainly like to know you
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Re: A Message To A Jerk
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by PhantomsBBYgrl on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 04:10:38 PM AEST
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This is a good peom, great write!
Yours truely,
PhantomsBBYgrl |
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Re: A Message To A Jerk
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 10:38:45 AM AEST
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| You tell 'em!! Brush 'em both off like lint from an old sweater, you're much too good for the likes of them anyway..;o) Larry Well done write! |
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Re: A Message To A Jerk
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 11:13:32 AM AEST
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I think this is a great poem. Getting your feelings out there like that....that's great!
Stacie (hiddendarkness1705) |
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Re: A Message To A Jerk
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:24:44 AM AEST
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Very good work.
U know what they say don't u?
There's one in every crowd.-
I know the feelings.
keep up the good writing.
hugs, luv,
emy
Thank u ssoo much for your comments on my work. |
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Re: A Message To A Jerk
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:34:24 AM AEST
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Very good work.
U know what they say don't u?
There's one in every crowd.-
I know the feelings.
keep up the good writing.
hugs, luv,
emy
Thank u ssoo much for your comments on my work. |
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Re: A Message To A Jerk
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:52:22 AM AEST
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| TO BE JUDGED BY THOSE WHO DO NOT KNOW YOU AND WHO ARE GUIDED BY THE HATERS IS A NEVER ENDING BATTLE...WELL DONE. |
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Re: A Message To A Jerk
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 01:27:38 PM AEST
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| You go girl. Why should you have to put up with their crap? Excellent message. *S* Cynthia |
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