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I feel the excitement growing daily,
Since that day you did announce,
That soon you’ll have another baby
Another one, on my lap, to bounce.

It brings back such fond memories
Of when our precious Che was conceived.
And all the priceless moments
In those fourteen years I’ve received.

I think of the joy he has brought to my life.
Since him, the world has been so good.
And I know he/she would make it even better
As only another baby could.

I can’t seem to concentrate now
On anything but this precious little soul,
Who already has me thinking of the times
When on the beach we will stroll.

So now I will patiently await your birth,
With dream of holding you in my arms.
My heart you have already captured
With your beautiful unborn charms.

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~Unborn Charms~

Contributed by Jenni_K on Thursday, 8th May 2008 @ 10:12:05 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

~~*~~

I feel the excitement growing daily,
Since that day you did announce,
That soon you’ll have another baby
Another one, on my lap, to bounce.

It brings back such fond memories
Of when our precious Che was conceived.
And all the priceless moments
In those fourteen years I’ve received.

I think of the joy he has brought to my life.
Since him, the world has been so good.
And I know he/she would make it even better
As only another baby could.

I can’t seem to concentrate now
On anything but this precious little soul,
Who already has me thinking of the times
When on the beach we will stroll.

So now I will patiently await your birth,
With dream of holding you in my arms.
My heart you have already captured
With your beautiful unborn charms.

~~*~~

Copyright Â© Jenni_K ... [ 2008-05-08 10:12:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ~Unborn Charms~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Zork on Thursday, 8th May 2008 @ 10:20:45 AM AEST
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A very beautiful poem...Keep it up.

-Zork

Re: ~Unborn Charms~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Saaaraxxx16 on Thursday, 8th May 2008 @ 10:36:36 AM AEST
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beautiful poem. great post!

Re: ~Unborn Charms~ (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Thursday, 8th May 2008 @ 11:13:20 AM AEST
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I am happy. I know the joy children bring to your life. you will be smiling huge.

Deadwriter

Re: ~Unborn Charms~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Brasco on Thursday, 8th May 2008 @ 02:13:56 PM AEST
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Well done, your words flowed smoothly

Re: ~Unborn Charms~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 08:42:04 AM AEST
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Absolutely wonderful Jenni! Beautifully done too! Congratulations...Miss ya...Russ

Re: ~Unborn Charms~ (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 11:22:52 AM AEST
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Oh jen,
I'm so happy for you'll. I know how importent che is and has been to you.
Beautifull announcement here.
awesome write.
huggs, smiles,
emy

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