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Array ( [sid] => 14221 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Your Eyes [time] => 2003-03-13 14:20:00 [hometext] => "Green Is The Color Of Her Kind..." [bodytext] => The way the visions fade away
In glistening moon that shines bright everyday
I see the sun but it has gone
It sighs to me no place to run
The darkness travels all through me
But the star chase, they cannot see
Wandering through shadows of yesterday
Looking towards the sky thats not the same
I plead to you but you cannot hear
Only the whispers cry their tears
Your eyes are the ones who deceive
But inside I cannot receive
Truth be seeked in promising lies
Before Your eyes begin to cry
Bridged between my heaven and my hell
Cannot say what I could tell
I cannot tell if this is real
Is this really how I’m suppost to feel?
As the roses of pain begin to melt
I cannot explain the day I felt
I leave them only to be with you
Your Eyes I keep, what can I do? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 39 [informant] => SpreadYourWings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Your Eyes

Contributed by SpreadYourWings on Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 02:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

The way the visions fade away
In glistening moon that shines bright everyday
I see the sun but it has gone
It sighs to me no place to run
The darkness travels all through me
But the star chase, they cannot see
Wandering through shadows of yesterday
Looking towards the sky thats not the same
I plead to you but you cannot hear
Only the whispers cry their tears
Your eyes are the ones who deceive
But inside I cannot receive
Truth be seeked in promising lies
Before Your eyes begin to cry
Bridged between my heaven and my hell
Cannot say what I could tell
I cannot tell if this is real
Is this really how I’m suppost to feel?
As the roses of pain begin to melt
I cannot explain the day I felt
I leave them only to be with you
Your Eyes I keep, what can I do?

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Re: Your Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 08:21:28 PM AEST
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Wow ... I truly loved this poem ... very good write! ... Jan

Re: Your Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 04:24:11 PM AEST
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i liked this very much a confused set of emotions

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