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Array ( [sid] => 142191 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Hurricane of thoughts [time] => 2008-05-07 06:42:02 [hometext] => I don't know what this is...Is it poetry or something else? I wrote it to A girl I love but I don't know what you would call it?? haha.. Any input would be good. First time I have ever writen anything like this. thanks -Nate [bodytext] => Tittled: A Hurricane of thoughts.

Is it posible to care about someone so much, When You barely know them?

But feel as though you have known them your entire life...

Is it posible to feel this good about someone?

Although Feeling's are Just A spiral of unstable thoughts...

Is it crazy to think life would be so much better with that person?

When You Felt is has, But only can hope it will stay that way.

Feeling can be such A Horrible thing, but also can open your eyes to things that will only make life better.

It feels though Time has been lost in this twisted world of anger and hate, But the Few seconds of happiness another can give you, Can Feel like an Eternity...

Love can be defined as such A misleading word, A word used to blind some, Trick others and on A very rare occasion..To mean you truly care about them so much that your insides cringe at the mere thought of being without them...

But to me Love is What makes one happy, It's what makes one smile, It's just simply what makes life better.

So what is my Definition of love?

Well...I guess the Answer would be.......You. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 2 [informant] => SickNate [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
A Hurricane of thoughts

Contributed by SickNate on Wednesday, 7th May 2008 @ 06:42:02 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Tittled: A Hurricane of thoughts.

Is it posible to care about someone so much, When You barely know them?

But feel as though you have known them your entire life...

Is it posible to feel this good about someone?

Although Feeling's are Just A spiral of unstable thoughts...

Is it crazy to think life would be so much better with that person?

When You Felt is has, But only can hope it will stay that way.

Feeling can be such A Horrible thing, but also can open your eyes to things that will only make life better.

It feels though Time has been lost in this twisted world of anger and hate, But the Few seconds of happiness another can give you, Can Feel like an Eternity...

Love can be defined as such A misleading word, A word used to blind some, Trick others and on A very rare occasion..To mean you truly care about them so much that your insides cringe at the mere thought of being without them...

But to me Love is What makes one happy, It's what makes one smile, It's just simply what makes life better.

So what is my Definition of love?

Well...I guess the Answer would be.......You.




Copyright © SickNate ... [ 2008-05-07 06:42:02]
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Re: A Hurricane of thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by SickNate on Wednesday, 7th May 2008 @ 06:46:02 AM AEST
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Sorry' Should have Double checked spelling...Can A mod please fix spelling or how do I fix it myself? Thanks -Nate




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