Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 11:51:11 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 142152 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unexpected news [time] => 2008-05-05 12:44:58 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Unexpected news

Several weeks went by

our hearts grew pretty closer

before

I like staying alone and being quiet

after we met

you changed me more and more

I became playful

I knew you were my everything

I would like to do anything for you

and I hoped I always gave you my best

you were always in my mind

I enjoyed to be with you every moment

One evening

you told me you were going to another city

there was something very important

you wanted to do for a long time

I was too thrilled to spell any word

slowly from my eyes were tears distilled

"We are happy together,

I always remember we ran out the moors for a long walks,

and spent all morning and afternoon there.

I thought as long as we were together,

nothing else mattered."

You said to me you often lingered outside of my home

to think about it

"I once tried to tell you early,

but I had no any courage.

Now the questions were before of my eyes......"

You hugged me tightly and spoke a few words of comfort to me before leaving

I understood well you would be comfortable as long as I stopped crying

It was time to say Good-Bye

I smiled and shaked your hands

"Let me congratulate you,

I wish you a good journey."

I pretended I was getting better

"You see,

how unexpected the new is!

it doesn't matter.

Believe me,

I will be getting better after you leave.

don't too worry about me,

remember to write to me."

Looking at your back

I called down a blessing on your head

When you disappeared into the night

I was very scared

it seemed that I was alone in the world

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 48 [informant] => holy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Unexpected news

Contributed by holy on Monday, 5th May 2008 @ 12:44:58 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Unexpected news

Several weeks went by

our hearts grew pretty closer

before

I like staying alone and being quiet

after we met

you changed me more and more

I became playful

I knew you were my everything

I would like to do anything for you

and I hoped I always gave you my best

you were always in my mind

I enjoyed to be with you every moment

One evening

you told me you were going to another city

there was something very important

you wanted to do for a long time

I was too thrilled to spell any word

slowly from my eyes were tears distilled

"We are happy together,

I always remember we ran out the moors for a long walks,

and spent all morning and afternoon there.

I thought as long as we were together,

nothing else mattered."

You said to me you often lingered outside of my home

to think about it

"I once tried to tell you early,

but I had no any courage.

Now the questions were before of my eyes......"

You hugged me tightly and spoke a few words of comfort to me before leaving

I understood well you would be comfortable as long as I stopped crying

It was time to say Good-Bye

I smiled and shaked your hands

"Let me congratulate you,

I wish you a good journey."

I pretended I was getting better

"You see,

how unexpected the new is!

it doesn't matter.

Believe me,

I will be getting better after you leave.

don't too worry about me,

remember to write to me."

Looking at your back

I called down a blessing on your head

When you disappeared into the night

I was very scared

it seemed that I was alone in the world

Copyright © holy ... [ 2008-05-05 12:44:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Unexpected news (User Rating: 1 )
by Roddy on Monday, 5th May 2008 @ 01:36:30 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I learned last summer that my GF was going to move. She hasn't done it yet when i heard that news i collapsed on the floor as if she had died and said to God "don't take her away from me please" I don't rememeber a time were i felt more weak or sick to my stomach I'm still dreading that day when she leaves. So I empathize with your situation I know its hard but times like these are what make us realize things only last forever if we will them to and even then it may not go accoding to plan. Hopefully me and my gf will stay togehter but only time will tell. And I wish you only peace and happiness for what your going through.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com