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Array ( [sid] => 142119 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye [time] => 2008-05-04 09:33:18 [hometext] => I am moving to Georgia in December because living at home is very difficult for me [bodytext] => I know I'm alive
But I really feel dead
Saying goodbye
Not something I dread

I put on a smile
To hide all the pain
Moving to Georgia
I would count as a gain

I have to get out
Escape this burden I bear
I need to get help
Leaving you in God's care

So I hope you'll forgive me
I really have tried
One day you'll see me
But for now it's goodbye [comments] => 3 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 52 [informant] => 6whiteRoses [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
Goodbye

Contributed by 6whiteRoses on Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 09:33:18 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



I know I'm alive
But I really feel dead
Saying goodbye
Not something I dread

I put on a smile
To hide all the pain
Moving to Georgia
I would count as a gain

I have to get out
Escape this burden I bear
I need to get help
Leaving you in God's care

So I hope you'll forgive me
I really have tried
One day you'll see me
But for now it's goodbye




Copyright © 6whiteRoses ... [ 2008-05-04 09:33:18]
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Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 10:17:52 AM AEST
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Hope everything works out.

Nice write.

~Stephan


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 10:32:11 AM AEST
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If you mean Georgia as in the southern united states, why would you do that to yourself?

I live in Georgia, and trust me, it's not somewhere you want to live.

Unless you like hicks....


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by 6whiteRoses on Wednesday, 7th May 2008 @ 02:00:18 AM AEST
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I would be moving to Georgia with my fiance and in with his aunt...so with were I would be moving it is beautiful....It's Gainesvill, GA.




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