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Array ( [sid] => 142117 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ''A SMALL WORLD'' [time] => 2008-05-04 06:24:49 [hometext] => This poem was wrote so mothers will think about who their leaving their babies with. [bodytext] => Please,please moma don't leave me here.
Her boyfriend is standing there drinking a beer.
As she left me crying and walked down the stairs.
Never looking back as if she doesn't care.
In the kitchen I heard a loud boom.
Thats when I ran upsrairs to my room.
He came upstairs screeming my name.
He was looking for me to blame.
Under my bed us where I ran and hid.
He came into my room and said"where are you kid".
From under my bed he pulled me out.
He said"hey little girl don't cry or pout.
I didn't cry I just turned my head.
When he was through I wished I was dead.
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''A SMALL WORLD''

Contributed by theoklapoet on Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 06:24:49 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Please,please moma don't leave me here.
Her boyfriend is standing there drinking a beer.
As she left me crying and walked down the stairs.
Never looking back as if she doesn't care.
In the kitchen I heard a loud boom.
Thats when I ran upsrairs to my room.
He came upstairs screeming my name.
He was looking for me to blame.
Under my bed us where I ran and hid.
He came into my room and said"where are you kid".
From under my bed he pulled me out.
He said"hey little girl don't cry or pout.
I didn't cry I just turned my head.
When he was through I wished I was dead.
Teresa Skyles//Theoklapoet

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Re: ''A SMALL WORLD'' (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 07:22:04 AM AEST
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Such a torturous write....I can feel the fright and pain.... very sad..Hope this is fictional and if it isn't then I hope they hurt the bastard 100 times more than he's hurt you...
Jenni

Re: ''A SMALL WORLD'' (User Rating: 1 )
by tamtam10 on Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 09:38:26 AM AEST
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this is soooo good!... i was like ready to cry... very touching!

Re: ''A SMALL WORLD'' (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 10:24:33 AM AEST
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I don't like this kind of writing - not that the writing is not good - its just what it is about.

I'm with Jenni_K - I hope the F&#$er gets his just desserts.

Good write about a painful subject.

~Stephan

Re: ''A SMALL WORLD'' (User Rating: 1 )
by ratty on Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 03:10:25 AM AEST
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well written

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