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heaven and hell,
right and wrong,
glory and sin,
divinity and depravation,
joy and sorrow,
peurile and godly,
thrives and grinds the human flesh.
Ground to dust so fine.
Whilst in pursuit of
the business of existance.

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(.....untitled....Please read and suggest a title...)

Contributed by joydeep_nath on Friday, 2nd May 2008 @ 04:02:54 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Between-
heaven and hell,
right and wrong,
glory and sin,
divinity and depravation,
joy and sorrow,
peurile and godly,
thrives and grinds the human flesh.
Ground to dust so fine.
Whilst in pursuit of
the business of existance.

Copyright © joydeep_nath ... [ 2008-05-02 16:02:54]
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Re: (.....untitled....Please read and suggest a title...) (User Rating: 1 )
by a7x36 on Friday, 2nd May 2008 @ 06:56:18 PM AEST
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title is whatever comes to your head, if you don't think you could properly name it, then don't. but i would hate to name it for you because it's work unique to you.

anyway, I thought it was compact and fairly deep. the last two lines are the ones that make the poem.

Re: (.....untitled....Please read and suggest a title...) (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Saturday, 3rd May 2008 @ 05:47:19 AM AEST
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I agree with a7x36...the title should be applied by you

a7x36 is also right about the title coming from within the last two lines.

Good Luck.

Nice write.

Re: (.....untitled....Please read and suggest a title...) (User Rating: 1 )
by akakin on Monday, 5th May 2008 @ 02:20:17 AM AEST
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i suck at picking titles of ma own poetry...
maybe it can be called BETWEEN

Re: (.....untitled....Please read and suggest a title...) (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 10:03:25 AM AEST
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like those before me
I struggle to name my own ramblins
but
it is a good flow....

Re: (.....untitled....Please read and suggest a title...) (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Monday, 16th November 2009 @ 08:26:59 AM AEST
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I like this alot, and having read it several times the word that keeps popping up in my head is "Images". Don't know why!
Great writing x x x

Re: (.....untitled....Please read and suggest a title...) (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Wednesday, 12th July 2017 @ 02:40:51 PM AEST
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Singularity god zero point nun are of the of the ox alpha omega the I am the nothing before the all the big bang rainbow connection , Muppet man pigs in space human race for equality and mutual acceptance without fear instead aim for higher consciousness perception, all the above become of the nun when non duality becomes your reality.

Re: (.....untitled....Please read and suggest a title...) (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Friday, 5th July 2019 @ 07:10:58 PM AEST
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Zero point of singularity

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