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Array ( [sid] => 142074 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Invisible Resident [time] => 2008-05-02 12:20:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Been gone for so long
that I
forgotten how to do this
you see
it's so hard to concentrate
when you got a hole in your soul
and the essence of your flow
has been ripped and shattered.

I am a captive of Ill Illusions
lost in confusion
adrift in a rift
of a emotional hell.
I don't wanna be a shadow no more
I wanna break free
but I've forgotten how to get back
and I no longer know how to be happy,
I have been down for so long
that I have trouble remembering
that no emotion
anymore than a wave
can maintain it's form
it breaks eventually.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 75 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

The Invisible Resident

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Friday, 2nd May 2008 @ 12:20:11 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Been gone for so long
that I
forgotten how to do this
you see
it's so hard to concentrate
when you got a hole in your soul
and the essence of your flow
has been ripped and shattered.

I am a captive of Ill Illusions
lost in confusion
adrift in a rift
of a emotional hell.
I don't wanna be a shadow no more
I wanna break free
but I've forgotten how to get back
and I no longer know how to be happy,
I have been down for so long
that I have trouble remembering
that no emotion
anymore than a wave
can maintain it's form
it breaks eventually.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2008-05-02 12:20:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Invisible Resident (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 2nd May 2008 @ 02:32:03 PM AEST
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LIfe at times seems to do this to us doesn't it?

You wrote a lovely poem with spark though it is touched with sadness.

Take heed you have friends to pick you up when you are down and feel you cannot get up on your own.

Hugs

Michelle

Re: The Invisible Resident (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 11:24:54 AM AEST
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I really like this alot. I can relate to it. I am looking forward to reading more of your pieces.

Deadwriter

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