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Array ( [sid] => 142025 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => thank you [time] => 2008-05-01 03:16:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => thank you..

I need a real live nigga

A real man from the start.

..knows how to take the pressure

When the heat is on..

..speaks their mind…

..sheds light on the heart.

I don’t need no man ..

..simple as said.

..don’t want a man

To wine and dine me

I want a man

That will stand tall beside me..

Don’t want no playa *****..

The games and the fun..

I want a man that can say

My love, my heart you just won..

_____

Now real talk.. I was never gaming you

Gaming me.. of course that is something your going to do..

.. if I’m not prowling around.. trying to find some new ground..

Then best believe that is the way it is.

But now I know and now I see..

That there ain’t funna ever be..

.. a you and me..

Now that I see I can stay standing tall..

Thank the lord for not letting me fall..

Because only he knows

..what I went through from the heart..

I am disappointed..

I saw potential..

But now I know..

This will be something to never start..

..to think I had almost let down my guard.
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thank you

Contributed by jillian_phan on Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 03:16:11 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

thank you..

I need a real live nigga

A real man from the start.

..knows how to take the pressure

When the heat is on..

..speaks their mind…

..sheds light on the heart.

I don’t need no man ..

..simple as said.

..don’t want a man

To wine and dine me

I want a man

That will stand tall beside me..

Don’t want no playa *****..

The games and the fun..

I want a man that can say

My love, my heart you just won..

_____

Now real talk.. I was never gaming you

Gaming me.. of course that is something your going to do..

.. if I’m not prowling around.. trying to find some new ground..

Then best believe that is the way it is.

But now I know and now I see..

That there ain’t funna ever be..

.. a you and me..

Now that I see I can stay standing tall..

Thank the lord for not letting me fall..

Because only he knows

..what I went through from the heart..

I am disappointed..

I saw potential..

But now I know..

This will be something to never start..

..to think I had almost let down my guard.

Copyright Â© jillian_phan ... [ 2008-05-01 03:16:11]
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Re: thank you (User Rating: 1 )
by BornReckless on Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 04:37:17 AM AEST
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The term "nigga" should be never be used. That's pure ignorance and quite offensive. Second of all this sounds like a really bad rap song. Nice try tho.

Re: thank you (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 10:23:42 PM AEST
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You have succeeded in turning your readers off with your very first stanza.

It portrays you are both ignorant and offensive.

Truly hurt your poem.

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