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My soul now lies bleeding, by words once spoken
Memories haunt me as I lay on my bed
And in the solitude of my room, many tears are shed

I am shattered, I am weary, I am hurt to the core
You played with my feelings, then walked out the door
No explanation, no note, no last goodbye
And in my solitude I suffer, and I don't know why

I must have been a fool, right from the start
You told me you cared , you captured my heart
Now all I have is memories, of you everyday
And in solitude the bitterness it eats me away

But everyday I am stronger, and I am moving on
I no longer cry at night, my love for you is gone
No more in solitude will I sit just waiting here for you
I made a promise to myself, No more will I be a fool

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No More The Fool

Contributed by jerseysue on Wednesday, 30th April 2008 @ 09:13:02 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My emotions destroyed ,my heart is broken
My soul now lies bleeding, by words once spoken
Memories haunt me as I lay on my bed
And in the solitude of my room, many tears are shed

I am shattered, I am weary, I am hurt to the core
You played with my feelings, then walked out the door
No explanation, no note, no last goodbye
And in my solitude I suffer, and I don't know why

I must have been a fool, right from the start
You told me you cared , you captured my heart
Now all I have is memories, of you everyday
And in solitude the bitterness it eats me away

But everyday I am stronger, and I am moving on
I no longer cry at night, my love for you is gone
No more in solitude will I sit just waiting here for you
I made a promise to myself, No more will I be a fool

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Re: No More The Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 30th April 2008 @ 09:53:14 AM AEST
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Sue,
a beautiful poem your emotions captured so delicate.
I am so sorry your heart is breaking sweet lady.

hugs and tissues to dry the tears

Michelle

Re: No More The Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 30th April 2008 @ 01:52:06 PM AEST
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A bit sad but beautifully written.
You go girl.
take care and hang tuff.
huggs, luv,
emy

Re: No More The Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 30th April 2008 @ 10:09:49 PM AEST
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Sue, this is such a sad and forlorn write. I'm sorry if this is truly what
is happening in your life. Fools we be, and fools we shall remain.
I believe that if we give in and lose that side of us, we are fated to
become like the stoic hearts that break all others. Don't lose the beauty
of trust, sweet lady. Someone is worthy of your foolish whims. (And I
hope you know how I mean that. In the BEST possible way)

Believe in yourself. I do. :) You have one of the biggest hearts
I know. Sending you sweet thoughts and hopes for a quickened,
brighter tomorrow.

*hugs*

~Breezy

Re: No More The Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 01:16:05 AM AEST
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Very strong words.
sorry bout the sadness, but this is an emotional write and honorably said.

Re: No More The Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 09:47:24 PM AEST
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Good for you, I wish you the strength you may need. It is such a long road back...

Re: No More The Fool (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 18th May 2014 @ 01:03:23 AM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings,

hugs n' love nessa

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