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After dinner

you became a positive speaker

You told me that you were enjoying your life's spring

Your facility in language was surprising

I thought it was natural for a bird to fly

you were like a naughty boy in my eyes



The restaurant was a short walk from my home

we walked and talked to enjoy our time

you said that you would have a nice sleep

because you finally became quiet and would never feel woful

"Thank you for coming

you are too kind a girl to refuse

all your words is above price."



we were shoulder and shoulder

I was a little afraid to take your hand

You told me you really felt much better

after the day you would be quieter and quieter

and you believed your future would be hoper and hoper



After a long long walk

I was slightly tired

After reture to my home

I wish I had a sweet dream

when I lay on my bed

suddenly felt I was not sleepy

everything with you was showing before of my eyes

instantly I got up and wrote down all the piece of our stories



[comments] => 2 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 48 [informant] => holy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Life's spring

Contributed by holy on Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 04:06:50 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Life's spring



After dinner

you became a positive speaker

You told me that you were enjoying your life's spring

Your facility in language was surprising

I thought it was natural for a bird to fly

you were like a naughty boy in my eyes



The restaurant was a short walk from my home

we walked and talked to enjoy our time

you said that you would have a nice sleep

because you finally became quiet and would never feel woful

"Thank you for coming

you are too kind a girl to refuse

all your words is above price."



we were shoulder and shoulder

I was a little afraid to take your hand

You told me you really felt much better

after the day you would be quieter and quieter

and you believed your future would be hoper and hoper



After a long long walk

I was slightly tired

After reture to my home

I wish I had a sweet dream

when I lay on my bed

suddenly felt I was not sleepy

everything with you was showing before of my eyes

instantly I got up and wrote down all the piece of our stories







Copyright © holy ... [ 2008-04-28 16:06:50]
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Re: Life's spring (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 04:23:43 PM AEST
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After reture to my home
After returned to my home


Re: Life's spring (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 04:46:07 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this write very much thanks for sharing.

Michelle




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