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and if you know what I am saying then you know
me
its a hidden world
and sometimes you can be so blind
that you can start to see

It's a hidden world
and the only way we find it again is if we
smile
its a hidden world
and once she hangs around you
you want her to stay for more than awhile

its a hidden world
and sometimes the cracks begin to mend
and sometimes you forget the money you have spent
its a hidden world
we only see it when we want to
and at times we really want to just say
"i give up"

until we realize that this complexity isn't really
the truth
until we realize that loving her isn't really
the truth
until we realize that tasting that tongue
rubbing against the broken scars
holding onto something so unstable
is really
just a way to hide ourselves
and we realize
that
its not a hidden world

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Contributed by juliestevens18 on Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 01:40:47 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

its a hidden world
and if you know what I am saying then you know
me
its a hidden world
and sometimes you can be so blind
that you can start to see

It's a hidden world
and the only way we find it again is if we
smile
its a hidden world
and once she hangs around you
you want her to stay for more than awhile

its a hidden world
and sometimes the cracks begin to mend
and sometimes you forget the money you have spent
its a hidden world
we only see it when we want to
and at times we really want to just say
"i give up"

until we realize that this complexity isn't really
the truth
until we realize that loving her isn't really
the truth
until we realize that tasting that tongue
rubbing against the broken scars
holding onto something so unstable
is really
just a way to hide ourselves
and we realize
that
its not a hidden world

we are hidden

Copyright © juliestevens18 ... [ 2008-04-28 13:40:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: hidden (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 02:48:43 PM AEST
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Very creative, strong, meaningfull write.
huggs,
emy
good work

Re: hidden (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 04:33:49 PM AEST
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Well written and it captures the mind and keeps you drawn in all the way through. Take care and thanks for the read....Steve

Re: hidden (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 11:21:30 AM AEST
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Great piece. Keep them coming.

Deadwriter

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