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Array ( [sid] => 141919 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Complete With You [time] => 2008-04-27 18:14:23 [hometext] => Thought of this when I was walking in Iraq the other day and it is ment for my wife but could be used talking about God as well. [bodytext] => Life is just a glimpse
Of the eternity we seek
So why should I fear death
When you’re everything I need
For I’ve found my love in you
Which made my life complete

~Steve~ [comments] => 3 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 2 [informant] => sride686 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Complete With You

Contributed by sride686 on Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 06:14:23 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Life is just a glimpse
Of the eternity we seek
So why should I fear death
When you’re everything I need
For I’ve found my love in you
Which made my life complete

~Steve~

Copyright Â© sride686 ... [ 2008-04-27 18:14:23]
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Re: Complete With You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 10:46:31 PM AEST
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Whether to God or your wife, Steve, this is just so
beautifully absorbing.

Though it is sad that you have to be where you are now, it's
wonderful that you have this presence and state of mind to
hold onto. Wonderfully written and so comforting.

Thoughts and prayers and hopes go out to you

Be safe ..

~Breezy

Re: Complete With You (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 11:19:47 PM AEST
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Steve,

I could not express anything to you, better than "Breezy" has just said.

This is so beautifully written, considering the stressful conditions, that you must endure.

Your wife must miss you, and although I don't know you...I believe that we all miss you and hope that you are retuned home soon.

We pray for your safety.

Re: Complete With You (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 05:07:53 PM AEST
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Steve this is simply lovely my friend.
I am in awe with the beauty of this.
I would also like to thank you for doing what you are doing. Be safe and come home soon.

hugsssss
Michelle

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