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Array ( [sid] => 141917 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => when you didn't want to send a text [time] => 2008-04-27 17:50:05 [hometext] => a little gift of encouragement for a little texter i know who has a heart bigger than her head. [bodytext] => So there we were,
Two peoples at two different crossroads.
Both of us at the beginning of tumultuous times.
You at the beginning of some arduous times.
And my times a bit formidable themselves.
But our times are both weak opponents.
If we both put on some boxing gloves and fought our times,
We would win in about one round, maybe two.

Sure, they're backbreaking times.
They're downright cruel times, at times.
But don't let it get you down.
Why don't you fight your time?
Better yet, fight your time against my time...
Like two pokemon wrapped in a disgustingly grueling battle.
Like a mudkip versus a camerupt.
The mudkip has the natural water advantage over camerupt's lame fire attacks.
I eventually just give up.

Okay, I admit my camerupt time isn't as strong as your mudkip time...
Don't rub it in my face.

If you keep testing me, I'll take out vespiquen.
You done messed up. This is a generation 4 pokemon, girl.
This is the real deal!
Prepare yourself...

And the battle lasts for days and we all die.
Everyone on earth. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 48 [informant] => dummie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
when you didn't want to send a text

Contributed by dummie on Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 05:50:05 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



So there we were,
Two peoples at two different crossroads.
Both of us at the beginning of tumultuous times.
You at the beginning of some arduous times.
And my times a bit formidable themselves.
But our times are both weak opponents.
If we both put on some boxing gloves and fought our times,
We would win in about one round, maybe two.

Sure, they're backbreaking times.
They're downright cruel times, at times.
But don't let it get you down.
Why don't you fight your time?
Better yet, fight your time against my time...
Like two pokemon wrapped in a disgustingly grueling battle.
Like a mudkip versus a camerupt.
The mudkip has the natural water advantage over camerupt's lame fire attacks.
I eventually just give up.

Okay, I admit my camerupt time isn't as strong as your mudkip time...
Don't rub it in my face.

If you keep testing me, I'll take out vespiquen.
You done messed up. This is a generation 4 pokemon, girl.
This is the real deal!
Prepare yourself...

And the battle lasts for days and we all die.
Everyone on earth.




Copyright © dummie ... [ 2008-04-27 17:50:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: when you didn't want to send a text (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 06:43:53 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this, like your narritive style, a fine peice of work, very real indeed . . .



thanks also for your read and comment . . .


Ben




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