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Array ( [sid] => 141914 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Happy time [time] => 2008-04-27 15:39:17 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Happy time

That evening we were both very happy
you told me your feeling very great
"That was rather a difficult question
it happened during my absence
but I couldn't accept my defeat."

"I believe your ability forever
don't abandon yourself to despair
whenever you have problem
don't forget I would like to share
What about having dinner together?"

"This is also what in my mind
let us go and have something to drink."

"Haha
I am your only friend
don't drink too much to forget to return."

"Yes
If I really catch the chance
how can I not to catch
It must be very nice!"
You told me your stories with a laugh
"Do you know
I had only one meal a day these passed days
now I am very thirsty and hungry."

Listening to you and looking at your smiling face
I had my very wishes
You were relaxed
I was relieved

I believe
as the days passed by
everything will be getting better and better
I hope you are ready to accept anything
and I wish you a good and lucky future
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Happy time

Contributed by holy on Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 03:39:17 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Happy time

That evening we were both very happy
you told me your feeling very great
"That was rather a difficult question
it happened during my absence
but I couldn't accept my defeat."

"I believe your ability forever
don't abandon yourself to despair
whenever you have problem
don't forget I would like to share
What about having dinner together?"

"This is also what in my mind
let us go and have something to drink."

"Haha
I am your only friend
don't drink too much to forget to return."

"Yes
If I really catch the chance
how can I not to catch
It must be very nice!"
You told me your stories with a laugh
"Do you know
I had only one meal a day these passed days
now I am very thirsty and hungry."

Listening to you and looking at your smiling face
I had my very wishes
You were relaxed
I was relieved

I believe
as the days passed by
everything will be getting better and better
I hope you are ready to accept anything
and I wish you a good and lucky future

Copyright © holy ... [ 2008-04-27 15:39:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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