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Array ( [sid] => 141861 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This is For Jantra [time] => 2008-04-25 17:30:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => This is how I feel................

oh and ah............................

since I've said that
here
this is for you

my life is my art
and my art sucks

(anyone? anyone?)

I'm glad to know we all agree
that the temps are rising,
there is something wrong with the mudball we live on
And I wish I could blame it on religion
but we all know it has to do with the humidity

Glacier ice melting
sea levels...
dead zone in the oceans
from the lives we live
giving off pollutions

I once heard every flame lit, contributes to the atmosphere's break down
every aresol can....

And then I wounder if i could.
I know I can, I could...

Question is, is it wood, or if it would
I would proclaim myself Christ if I should
but only if it could
Oh, ******* god if it would
keep my home alive
as mother stood

You see as one of god I believe he's in me, I know with strength he will guide me

Sad though I don't believe in man, although in my time of shame he will see me

I wished when you looked
you would hear thee

Now that winter comes two months later
and the insects that lathered away from the cold
are eating our trees faster
and we are happy we haven't seen a hurricane in two years
that really mattered

I say oh, god, I wish I was stronger

I know in your name you will hide me
but by our way they have found me

...................

I say my thought of life wasn't mine
it was a thought of awe
But when I sit behind
I wounder about the children and all

All the things that made this strange world real
And I truelly don't won't want to believe one day
this planet won't feel

Mother gave me life
as god gave me a place

and when I witness what is truelly at stake
I wounder why the placement of my words should really make.... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 21 [informant] => rhei76 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
This is For Jantra

Contributed by rhei76 on Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 05:30:08 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



This is how I feel................

oh and ah............................

since I've said that
here
this is for you

my life is my art
and my art sucks

(anyone? anyone?)

I'm glad to know we all agree
that the temps are rising,
there is something wrong with the mudball we live on
And I wish I could blame it on religion
but we all know it has to do with the humidity

Glacier ice melting
sea levels...
dead zone in the oceans
from the lives we live
giving off pollutions

I once heard every flame lit, contributes to the atmosphere's break down
every aresol can....

And then I wounder if i could.
I know I can, I could...

Question is, is it wood, or if it would
I would proclaim myself Christ if I should
but only if it could
Oh, ******* god if it would
keep my home alive
as mother stood

You see as one of god I believe he's in me, I know with strength he will guide me

Sad though I don't believe in man, although in my time of shame he will see me

I wished when you looked
you would hear thee

Now that winter comes two months later
and the insects that lathered away from the cold
are eating our trees faster
and we are happy we haven't seen a hurricane in two years
that really mattered

I say oh, god, I wish I was stronger

I know in your name you will hide me
but by our way they have found me

...................

I say my thought of life wasn't mine
it was a thought of awe
But when I sit behind
I wounder about the children and all

All the things that made this strange world real
And I truelly don't won't want to believe one day
this planet won't feel

Mother gave me life
as god gave me a place

and when I witness what is truelly at stake
I wounder why the placement of my words should really make....




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Re: This is For Jantra (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 05:39:53 PM AEST
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I thought we use to be able to edit this stuff.
one of you eyes let me know how to fix (edit) my words here.
Let me know hwere to go, It's been awhile I'm still sticky.


Re: This is For Jantra (User Rating: 1 )
by a7x36 on Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 10:16:53 AM AEST
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yet another great piece that is so comprehensible in a fantastically incomprehensible way

Your God thoughts are deep.




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