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Array ( [sid] => 141840 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Should Tell You [time] => 2008-04-24 22:55:23 [hometext] => i've always wanted to tell someone ONE thing... and i can't do it.... [bodytext] => i've been wanting to tell you something for a long time
and it's eating at me inside
there have been so many chances
and so many times i've tried

what i wish to tell you, might surprise you
in many more ways than one
i feel that secret is on my shoulders
and it weighs over a ton

i've given so many hints to you
and i thought you would know
but i guess hints aren't enough
because you don't understand everything i throw

i want to tell you straight forward
but i wouldn't know what to say
but i should tell you what this something is
so my insides won't be knawed away [comments] => 4 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 48 [informant] => breezyweezy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

I Should Tell You

Contributed by breezyweezy on Thursday, 24th April 2008 @ 10:55:23 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

i've been wanting to tell you something for a long time
and it's eating at me inside
there have been so many chances
and so many times i've tried

what i wish to tell you, might surprise you
in many more ways than one
i feel that secret is on my shoulders
and it weighs over a ton

i've given so many hints to you
and i thought you would know
but i guess hints aren't enough
because you don't understand everything i throw

i want to tell you straight forward
but i wouldn't know what to say
but i should tell you what this something is
so my insides won't be knawed away

Copyright © breezyweezy ... [ 2008-04-24 22:55:23]
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Re: I Should Tell You (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Punk on Thursday, 24th April 2008 @ 10:58:42 PM AEST
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Good poem. conveys the feeling well, keep it up

Re: I Should Tell You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 01:27:21 AM AEST
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Good piece....I'll pass on the advice I was given.... Tell that someone...don't let it knaw away at you....
Jenni

Re: I Should Tell You (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 05:47:34 AM AEST
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good write. not too many people can tackle the rhyme scheme. =) And yes, it is naturally better to tell someone how you feel, there's always a possibility of getting hurt because of it but its better to get things like that off of your chest.

Re: I Should Tell You (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 05:47:39 AM AEST
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good write. not too many people can tackle the rhyme scheme. =) And yes, it is naturally better to tell someone how you feel, there's always a possibility of getting hurt because of it but its better to get things like that off of your chest.

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