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Array ( [sid] => 14182 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Harvey [time] => 2003-03-12 23:20:00 [hometext] => ** This is from my muse's POV (name's Opal Wray) about the loss of her true love, Harvey Barnes. ** [bodytext] => You stood by me when things were down
You held me close as I cried on your shoulder
You were the light of my life
My one and only

The day I met you,
I came alive for the first time
Nothing else would matter,
When I was with you

You were my fallen angel
My angelic devil
Nothing could tear me from your side
Nothing, except death

God has taken my angel away
Why now? Why so soon?
I ache for your touch
I beg to see your sweet smile once again

Harvey
My fallen angel
My one and only
Forever more [comments] => 3 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 22 [informant] => undead_poet14 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Harvey

Contributed by undead_poet14 on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You stood by me when things were down
You held me close as I cried on your shoulder
You were the light of my life
My one and only

The day I met you,
I came alive for the first time
Nothing else would matter,
When I was with you

You were my fallen angel
My angelic devil
Nothing could tear me from your side
Nothing, except death

God has taken my angel away
Why now? Why so soon?
I ache for your touch
I beg to see your sweet smile once again

Harvey
My fallen angel
My one and only
Forever more

Copyright © undead_poet14 ... [ 2003-03-12 23:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Harvey (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 12:58:08 AM AEST
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brilliant! an excellent write! *looks around sheepishly and thinks to herself why didn't mine think of that!?* ha! your super creative! hugs, happiness and love to you and opal wray, always nessa

Re: Harvey (User Rating: 1 )
by Amoeba on Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 05:59:38 AM AEST
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Top poem. I enjoyed reading this one. Looking forward to reading more, so keep posting them.

Re: Harvey (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 09:19:16 AM AEST
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Beautiful yet so sad for them!
You put this into a great poem!
Christina

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