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Places left behind.

Contributed by iodinelove on Monday, 21st April 2008 @ 01:27:02 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract



To speak plainly
The mountain that overlooks
The pale ephemeral shore
Heightens my remorse

(The thunder of my heart
Is dwindled
In the thunder of the rain)
Weeping gently

With winds across the plains
Of open faces
Stirring leaves in places
Left behind

Trinity spoke the second tome
Jill rang the judge, paid
The bellhop, and killed the dog.

Lovers coughed iodine laughter
Lapsed journeys; calling nowhere
On the phone, calling household dreams.

Falsehood—spent on ecstasy— three dollars
On the bathroom sink
Two

Heaven follows closely

Given god can hear us.




Copyright © iodinelove ... [ 2008-04-21 13:27:02]
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Re: Places left behind. (User Rating: 1 )
by a7x36 on Monday, 21st April 2008 @ 04:47:27 PM AEST
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Lovers coughed iodine laughter

that line is awesome.

I didn't take any message or anything away from this which really helped me enjoy it. Just reading this made me feel good. A canvas painted with words.

Have a nice day.


Re: Places left behind. (User Rating: 1 )
by liamleash on Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 10:48:31 AM AEST
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Loved this poem intelligently wrote.




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