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Me go

Over the hills and water
Runs

I'd swim the deepest ocean
For you

Hold me tight don't let
Me go

For our love is so very rare
~~Smile~~

That is why I'd walk hills
And mountains high

For you to hold me tight and
Don't let go

As we dance amidst the stars
In limbo we stay

So hold me tight don't let me
Go

For our love will be as a gem
Beautiful and rare
Amidst the planets of stars

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Hold Me Tight

Contributed by honey56 on Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Hold me tight don't let
Me go

Over the hills and water
Runs

I'd swim the deepest ocean
For you

Hold me tight don't let
Me go

For our love is so very rare
~~Smile~~

That is why I'd walk hills
And mountains high

For you to hold me tight and
Don't let go

As we dance amidst the stars
In limbo we stay

So hold me tight don't let me
Go

For our love will be as a gem
Beautiful and rare
Amidst the planets of stars

Copyright © honey56 ... [ 2008-04-20 22:45:00]
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Re: Hold Me Tight (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 11:11:48 PM AEST
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Oh honey, what a lovely, LOVELY piece. So gorgeous in all
it's affirmation. The ending stanza was especially wonderful.

Beautiful, hun. Just beautiful!

~Breezy

Re: Hold Me Tight (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 21st April 2008 @ 03:26:37 AM AEST
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A beautiful plea..... well rendered... Jenni

Re: Hold Me Tight (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 03:32:55 PM AEST
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Simple yet a master's stroke. beautifully written my friend;specially those last line verses are outstanding.
Thank so for sharing.
with lots of love and respect
FRANCO

Re: Hold Me Tight (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 30th April 2008 @ 09:18:57 AM AEST
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This is very nice

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