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Array ( [sid] => 141720 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eerie Sadness [time] => 2008-04-20 07:01:58 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Today the sun shine bright
But a eerie brightness

I stand and look at the bluest
Sky

Clouds are white as snow

But a sadness creep within
The air

I stand trying to figure out
This sadness filling the air

With tears running down my
Cheeks

Heart is crying and wondering
What cause all this sadness
So thick

I seen a day like this once before
Maybe three times are more

I cant stop looking toward the sky
While this sadness continuously run
Inside of me

I pray not to see a death come today
Please dear God let this thing pass
Me by

Loneliness hurt alone with the grief
Oh my Lord

Let this sadness in my
Mind be clean by the new wakens of
Tomorrow dawn

I wish not to sing a funeral march nor
To hear one in my soul

This day the air is creepy and smells
Of eeriness

I feel it walking over my body today
Wearing me down like heavy chains
Chains
Just chained me down to no ends

My heart is crying can't you
See

So heavy Lord, So heavy Lord
Let tomorrow dawn lighten this
Eerie sadness as a dream
Let me wake to tomorrow dawn
With happy heart

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Eerie Sadness

Contributed by honey56 on Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 07:01:58 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Today the sun shine bright
But a eerie brightness

I stand and look at the bluest
Sky

Clouds are white as snow

But a sadness creep within
The air

I stand trying to figure out
This sadness filling the air

With tears running down my
Cheeks

Heart is crying and wondering
What cause all this sadness
So thick

I seen a day like this once before
Maybe three times are more

I cant stop looking toward the sky
While this sadness continuously run
Inside of me

I pray not to see a death come today
Please dear God let this thing pass
Me by

Loneliness hurt alone with the grief
Oh my Lord

Let this sadness in my
Mind be clean by the new wakens of
Tomorrow dawn

I wish not to sing a funeral march nor
To hear one in my soul

This day the air is creepy and smells
Of eeriness

I feel it walking over my body today
Wearing me down like heavy chains
Chains
Just chained me down to no ends

My heart is crying can't you
See

So heavy Lord, So heavy Lord
Let tomorrow dawn lighten this
Eerie sadness as a dream
Let me wake to tomorrow dawn
With happy heart

Copyright © honey56 ... [ 2008-04-20 07:01:58]
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Re: Eerie Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 07:07:40 AM AEST
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i liked the flow of this and its very interesting.. I like how it says about God and you ask GOd to help.. this has great wording too

rock on,
vampyress Jenni

Re: Eerie Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 10:58:22 AM AEST
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Tomorrow, the sun will shine brilliantly for you... and the eerie sadness will be gone... He has heard your call....Good write...
Jenni

Re: Eerie Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 09:57:32 PM AEST
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Some days we just feel it, you know?

You captured that understanding well, here honey. I
hope your day turned happier. ^_^

~Breezy

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