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Array ( [sid] => 141710 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my weaker moments [time] => 2008-04-19 19:07:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You put me up on a pedestal,
Only to watch me fall.
You pull me up to push me down.
You are the meanest of all means.
I let you in my heart,
Only to have you walk all over it.
Was anything left untouched?
You had me every which way you wanted.
But you were never happy,
Never happy with me.
Don't believe in what the photo's say,
I'm not ok.
One day, I'll pick myself up off the ground.
I'll never let you push me again.
One day I'll say I've had enough,
But today I stay.
In my weaker moments I still love you. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 48 [informant] => surge_joebot [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

my weaker moments

Contributed by surge_joebot on Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 07:07:20 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You put me up on a pedestal,
Only to watch me fall.
You pull me up to push me down.
You are the meanest of all means.
I let you in my heart,
Only to have you walk all over it.
Was anything left untouched?
You had me every which way you wanted.
But you were never happy,
Never happy with me.
Don't believe in what the photo's say,
I'm not ok.
One day, I'll pick myself up off the ground.
I'll never let you push me again.
One day I'll say I've had enough,
But today I stay.
In my weaker moments I still love you.

Copyright © surge_joebot ... [ 2008-04-19 19:07:20]
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Re: my weaker moments (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 12:01:10 AM AEST
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When you are in love with someone, sometimes it can take years before you can truly move on. But move on is exactly what you must do. There is too much left in life yet.

Enjoy the sunrises...and sunsets.

Excellent write.

Re: my weaker moments (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 03:53:20 AM AEST
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Awww so touching....really sad, but I agree.. you need to move on...
Jenni

Re: my weaker moments (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 04:04:43 AM AEST
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very sad write. i have been in this situation myself..the best thing to do is just walk away..it's hard when your in love i know..but you gotta rip it off like a bandaid..it's gonna hurt like hell, your gonna cry...and it will take time before you don't think about it and cry anymore..but you gotta do what you gotta do..your life is worth more then this situation...i can guerantee the next situation only gets better...the next might not be perfect, and it might not be the one, but it will be better then this one...just let it go.

Re: my weaker moments (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 08:17:20 PM AEST
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Insightful, both of the behaviour of the victimizer and that of the vulnerable. Love has got a lot to answer for.

Spike

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