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It does nothing after the heart has been butchered.
With it, you can’t fix a broken heart,
Not after it’s been torn apart.
It won’t anyone of the pain inside,
The kind that makes your insides wish they’d died.
It can’t fix anything.
Not once someone starts bleeding.
Sorry…what good will that do anyone?
It won’t erase what you’ve done.
It’s useless
After you create such a mess.
Completely a waste of time,
Just like doing that crime.
But if this is the truth,
Then why am I waiting for you to say it?
Why am I waiting for you to apologize for everything you did?
I’m still just a kid.
Don’t you see that?
I wasn’t ready for you to take my heart and then beat it with a bat.
I wasn’t ready.
And I’m not sure I will be.
You’re not someone anyone can prepare for.
And I’m not sure I want you anymore.
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Sorry

Contributed by xoBrokenxo on Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 11:20:06 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I hate the word.
It does nothing after the heart has been butchered.
With it, you can’t fix a broken heart,
Not after it’s been torn apart.
It won’t anyone of the pain inside,
The kind that makes your insides wish they’d died.
It can’t fix anything.
Not once someone starts bleeding.
Sorry…what good will that do anyone?
It won’t erase what you’ve done.
It’s useless
After you create such a mess.
Completely a waste of time,
Just like doing that crime.
But if this is the truth,
Then why am I waiting for you to say it?
Why am I waiting for you to apologize for everything you did?
I’m still just a kid.
Don’t you see that?
I wasn’t ready for you to take my heart and then beat it with a bat.
I wasn’t ready.
And I’m not sure I will be.
You’re not someone anyone can prepare for.
And I’m not sure I want you anymore.

Copyright Â© xoBrokenxo ... [ 2008-04-19 11:20:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 02:28:25 PM AEST
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Such sadness in this write. I felt every ounce of pain.
Powerful in its content, so sorry for your hurt. I hope that wound heals.

huge hugs

Michelle

Re: Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 10:45:14 PM AEST
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Hope Everything gets better... I know the feeling though.... All too well =(

Re: Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 07:21:55 AM AEST
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this is definately a sad write.. you can feel the pain the expression in here is so solid and well done.. dont' worry though your not alone.. we all or most of us anyhow have gone through this.. things really do get better and I hope they get better for you sooner than later.. just hang in there ..

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

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