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Array ( [sid] => 141687 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Let me tell you a story [time] => 2008-04-19 01:06:25 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Let me tell you a story

This is a story about love
it is between a beautiful girl and a boy very handsome
it takes place many years ago in the countryside near my home
it is a special love story starting in troubles
now they are living together very happy without any sorrows

Because it is a story about love
starting when they were seventeen years old
then they were in the same school
they liked each other with their pure heart and never caused trouble
she wrote down all of the meetings because they meant so much to her life of school

Because it is a story about love
she married with him when she was twenty-five year old
who can guess how hard to face around the long long eight years
nobody in their home agreed their relation and always repeated no way no way the same word
they still spent a lot of time with each other

When I read and feel some articles about broken love today
I have many words want to say
Please believe there is a real lover comes to you one day
because love is a wonderful name to everybody
it is very important for you having deep feelings for each other no matter what never say sorry








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Let me tell you a story

Contributed by holy on Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 01:06:25 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Let me tell you a story

This is a story about love
it is between a beautiful girl and a boy very handsome
it takes place many years ago in the countryside near my home
it is a special love story starting in troubles
now they are living together very happy without any sorrows

Because it is a story about love
starting when they were seventeen years old
then they were in the same school
they liked each other with their pure heart and never caused trouble
she wrote down all of the meetings because they meant so much to her life of school

Because it is a story about love
she married with him when she was twenty-five year old
who can guess how hard to face around the long long eight years
nobody in their home agreed their relation and always repeated no way no way the same word
they still spent a lot of time with each other

When I read and feel some articles about broken love today
I have many words want to say
Please believe there is a real lover comes to you one day
because love is a wonderful name to everybody
it is very important for you having deep feelings for each other no matter what never say sorry












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Re: Let me tell you a story (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 01:09:21 AM AEST
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it is very important for you having deep feelings for each other no matter what never say sorry
it is very important for you having deep feelings for each other no matter if even never say sorry


Re: Let me tell you a story (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 01:16:10 AM AEST
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who can guess how hard to face around the long long eight years
who can guesses how hard to face around the long long eight years


Re: Let me tell you a story (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 02:07:44 AM AEST
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Holy, I am so impressed with how well your english is coming along. You are grasping concepts and ideas that I would have no idea of how to convey in chinese.
and of course it is a wonderful message for all of us.
Thank you!


Re: Let me tell you a story (User Rating: 1 )
by TheGrimReporsHourglass on Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 02:15:54 AM AEST
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Nice Poem-Let me tell you a story-The sorry I never understood 14 years going strong dwell this Im not it was said about a weakness its in the past just commin curtiousy(sp?)-Let Me Tell You A Story-Out The Door I Went-By Friday I Dont Know-Comment from The Grim Reaper,Devils Priest,D.E.L.Jr.


Re: Let me tell you a story (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 06:23:16 AM AEST
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beautiful story


Re: Let me tell you a story (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 08:04:00 AM AEST
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who can guess how hard to face around the long long eight years
who can guess how hard to face around the long long eight years




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