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That when I look at what I’ve done to myself,
I feel satisfaction from it.
It’s quite sick.
And I don’t understand why.

My life is turning into a freakin’ lie.
I can’t do anything without faking the way I feel.
Smile for the parents, laugh for the friends.
Eventually, I’m going to have to make amends.
But I’m not ready yet, to show them what’s really going on.
And maybe I never will be.
Someone needs to help me.
I need someone to see,
What it’s really like.

I’m sick of lying.
I’m sick of pretending I’m okay when I all I feel like doing is crying.
I’m sick of smiling for them,
And I’m sick of laughing for them.
This pain will show itself eventually.
And when it does, then everyone will finally see
What it’s like to be me.
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To Be Me

Contributed by Bubbles02 on Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 09:49:50 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I find it pathetic
That when I look at what I’ve done to myself,
I feel satisfaction from it.
It’s quite sick.
And I don’t understand why.

My life is turning into a freakin’ lie.
I can’t do anything without faking the way I feel.
Smile for the parents, laugh for the friends.
Eventually, I’m going to have to make amends.
But I’m not ready yet, to show them what’s really going on.
And maybe I never will be.
Someone needs to help me.
I need someone to see,
What it’s really like.

I’m sick of lying.
I’m sick of pretending I’m okay when I all I feel like doing is crying.
I’m sick of smiling for them,
And I’m sick of laughing for them.
This pain will show itself eventually.
And when it does, then everyone will finally see
What it’s like to be me.

Copyright Â© Bubbles02 ... [ 2008-04-18 09:49:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: To Be Me (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 09:53:20 AM AEST
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moving write ...it is time to tell someone and let the truth be known for if it is not faced you cannot start the process of healing

NS

Re: To Be Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 10:09:10 PM AEST
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Bubbles,

This must have taken a lot of courage to write. I can only hope that you, personally, do not have these feelings.

Truly an emotional piece.

Good write.

Re: To Be Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 11:51:44 PM AEST
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words i could say myself.... not NEAR the same way tho.......

we could mean them in totally different ways... but... i think it's something many people can relate to... great write

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