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…to forever last

At the time when we’d first met
There came a spark, I’d not known yet
But there was something lying there
To bring us to this point we share

Of you, there is much to admire
And years have spawned my strong desire
When not with you it pangs inside
This emptiness I try to hide

Throughout a day, passes not an hour
The thoughts of which, you don’t overpower
An onslaught that I cannot fight
Invades my dreams, in the late of night

For it’s of me, you’ve become a part
A contract etched on the walls of my heart
And with that blood there’s made a seal
Significant in this love that’s real

But should you feel that it’s not true
You think that it’s too much for you
If there is question or a doubt
Or there’s a need for a breakout

With what decision that is made
It’s with our hearts it will be paid
For this could be no easy task
And truthfulness is all I’d ask

For without you, there’d be a shell of me
My day’s left to life, I would be just to be
If it’s your will, then I shall not contest
For this one’s about your happiness

So now I’ll take each moment spent
Never to forget what they have meant
And lock the memories of our past
Here in my heart…to forever last

~*~

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...to forever last

Contributed by ZiggyB on Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 08:05:51 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

~*~

…to forever last

At the time when we’d first met
There came a spark, I’d not known yet
But there was something lying there
To bring us to this point we share

Of you, there is much to admire
And years have spawned my strong desire
When not with you it pangs inside
This emptiness I try to hide

Throughout a day, passes not an hour
The thoughts of which, you don’t overpower
An onslaught that I cannot fight
Invades my dreams, in the late of night

For it’s of me, you’ve become a part
A contract etched on the walls of my heart
And with that blood there’s made a seal
Significant in this love that’s real

But should you feel that it’s not true
You think that it’s too much for you
If there is question or a doubt
Or there’s a need for a breakout

With what decision that is made
It’s with our hearts it will be paid
For this could be no easy task
And truthfulness is all I’d ask

For without you, there’d be a shell of me
My day’s left to life, I would be just to be
If it’s your will, then I shall not contest
For this one’s about your happiness

So now I’ll take each moment spent
Never to forget what they have meant
And lock the memories of our past
Here in my heart…to forever last

~*~

Copyright Â© ZiggyB ... [ 2008-04-17 20:05:51]
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Re: ...to forever last (User Rating: 1 )
by SilverRain on Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 09:24:02 PM AEST
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Wow ZiggyB really an awesome write! Very touching. Well done!

Re: ...to forever last (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 10:47:17 PM AEST
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awesome write!!! this was really good, and very touching. it helps the reader get the drift of how your feeling towards this other person, how great you're memories together are that you want to just jkeep them close forever and it helps bare how much you care/love them considering no matter what happens you want them to be content and happy. keep up the good work. =]

Re: ...to forever last (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 01:59:18 AM AEST
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A good write of selfless love.....the best kind...
Jenni

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