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Array ( [sid] => 141634 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Remember [time] => 2008-04-16 21:52:18 [hometext] => We recently had a Poetry-Slam at school, and I recited this poem. My girlfriend sat across the room as I recited, but I did not take my eyes off of her, even as I was reciting. I love her so much, and I miss the good times we had/have. She cried! [bodytext] => There are so many memories,
Most of them not yet lost,
That will keep us together.
None of them have a cost.

Remember all the good times.
There is no cost to loving you.
Except after school,
When you would steal my Mountain Dew.

We meet everyday.
From the lockers to the hall.
Next time I hold you,
I won't let go at all.

Remember the ball on your house,
We thought it was stuck in place.
Well it kind of figures.
It rolled off and hit me in the face.

The skateboarding in your driveway.
When you tried to turn around,
I was there to hold you
So you would not fall on the ground.

Remember the ice
That fell down your shirt.
I thought that was funny,
Until I fell in the dirt.

The good times with friends
In a room with no scars.
That was at least until I laid down,
And hit my head on those bars.

Remember watching movies,
Until I had to leave.
I was with you.
Another thing I could not believe.

I lost one thing,
To gain something better.
And it all started,
With that one letter.

All the faces we saw,
Walking through the store.
I only saw you,
And I could not want more.

I miss you when I am sleeping,
And even more when I am awake.
This is the kind of love,
That no person could fake.

We have planned our future,
A house, a kid or two.
I am forever in love,
How about you? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 24 [informant] => nvn_jacobs [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
Remember

Contributed by nvn_jacobs on Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 09:52:18 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



There are so many memories,
Most of them not yet lost,
That will keep us together.
None of them have a cost.

Remember all the good times.
There is no cost to loving you.
Except after school,
When you would steal my Mountain Dew.

We meet everyday.
From the lockers to the hall.
Next time I hold you,
I won't let go at all.

Remember the ball on your house,
We thought it was stuck in place.
Well it kind of figures.
It rolled off and hit me in the face.

The skateboarding in your driveway.
When you tried to turn around,
I was there to hold you
So you would not fall on the ground.

Remember the ice
That fell down your shirt.
I thought that was funny,
Until I fell in the dirt.

The good times with friends
In a room with no scars.
That was at least until I laid down,
And hit my head on those bars.

Remember watching movies,
Until I had to leave.
I was with you.
Another thing I could not believe.

I lost one thing,
To gain something better.
And it all started,
With that one letter.

All the faces we saw,
Walking through the store.
I only saw you,
And I could not want more.

I miss you when I am sleeping,
And even more when I am awake.
This is the kind of love,
That no person could fake.

We have planned our future,
A house, a kid or two.
I am forever in love,
How about you?




Copyright © nvn_jacobs ... [ 2008-04-16 21:52:18]
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Re: Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 05:39:26 AM AEST
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awww, this is so sweet, your gf is lucky to have you!


Re: Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 10:30:44 AM AEST
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Very cute write.... made me smile...it must have been so touching to your g/friend...
Jenni


Re: Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 08:44:04 PM AEST
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This is what young love does. Gets us all mushy inside. How I remember those times.

Good writing young fella.


Re: Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Saaaraxxx16 on Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 11:56:12 PM AEST
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that was so pretty, and your girlfriend is very lucky to have someone that cares about her as much as you do. awesome write.




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