Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	01-June 12:06:27 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 141631 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I don’t know how [time] => 2008-04-16 19:30:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => How can I give you all of me
when I’m broken on the inside
when emotionally I’m totally wasted
when all I want to do is hide

How can I show you how I feel
if the words just fall apart
if my mind cant perceive what is going on
and I speak with a torn apart heart

I’m so sick of having to be strong
and hunger to find my place where I belong
that now that I found the love of my life
I breathe out
I let go
I relax

But how fair is this on you, my love
Who I smother and try and hold on too
my insecurities take control
make me weak
say things I don’t mean
hurt you with the words I speak

I don’t want to do that
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 21 [informant] => SilverRain [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

I don’t know how

Contributed by SilverRain on Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 07:30:51 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

How can I give you all of me
when I’m broken on the inside
when emotionally I’m totally wasted
when all I want to do is hide

How can I show you how I feel
if the words just fall apart
if my mind cant perceive what is going on
and I speak with a torn apart heart

I’m so sick of having to be strong
and hunger to find my place where I belong
that now that I found the love of my life
I breathe out
I let go
I relax

But how fair is this on you, my love
Who I smother and try and hold on too
my insecurities take control
make me weak
say things I don’t mean
hurt you with the words I speak

I don’t want to do that

Copyright Â© SilverRain ... [ 2008-04-16 19:30:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: I don’t know how (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 06:49:31 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This is deeply touching...I totally enjoyed this.... I can so relate to the 3rd verse.....
Jenni

Re: I don’t know how (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 11:12:19 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Great write. If they know where you are coming from and care about you it will help them deal with what is going on. Even the strongest need a time to depend on someone else. It is not weakness, but human nature to interact and have give and take with one another. Keep the writes coming.

Deadwriter

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com