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Array ( [sid] => 14161 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => like the girl [time] => 2003-03-12 16:40:00 [hometext] => this poem is a very personal write for me it has a lot of meaning......and maybe some one else can make some meaning of it too [bodytext] => here i am expecting just a little bit more
poinntless to parade around rational thinking
sorry to be biased over rated friend i guess
never really had the will to win
bend backwards for endless tales
now im here expecting just a little bit more

styling, mirrors
make good nightmares
did he kiss you
love the makeup
cover up cover up
set 'em all afire
secong guess, such a stress, another mess

here i lay covered with paranoid scabs
now i can loose here die a young man
blame me for everything ill take capitol punishment
find another lover another life let go
thriving in bed jobless downer
here i lay need just a little bit more

morning paper with the news
another face left, one more angel lost
cold solute i loved you cold solute i loved you
feel me i feel you in the air
her i lay wanting just a little bit more [comments] => 7 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 48 [informant] => apartment213 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
like the girl

Contributed by apartment213 on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 04:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



here i am expecting just a little bit more
poinntless to parade around rational thinking
sorry to be biased over rated friend i guess
never really had the will to win
bend backwards for endless tales
now im here expecting just a little bit more

styling, mirrors
make good nightmares
did he kiss you
love the makeup
cover up cover up
set 'em all afire
secong guess, such a stress, another mess

here i lay covered with paranoid scabs
now i can loose here die a young man
blame me for everything ill take capitol punishment
find another lover another life let go
thriving in bed jobless downer
here i lay need just a little bit more

morning paper with the news
another face left, one more angel lost
cold solute i loved you cold solute i loved you
feel me i feel you in the air
her i lay wanting just a little bit more




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Re: like the girl (User Rating: 1 )
by MrWrite on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 04:50:19 PM AEST
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This was a very thought-provoking write. Very emotionally written.


Re: like the girl (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 05:14:19 PM AEST
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very personal... images jump out at me... blessings...


Re: like the girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 07:27:17 PM AEST
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Good write... I liked this very much
thanks for sharing


Re: like the girl (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 01:20:46 AM AEST
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wow such passion..." here i am expecting just alittle bit more"... great poem, i love it

Lindsey


Re: like the girl (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 05:28:40 AM AEST
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great expression, i'm sure i did'nt get the full meaning of it but an awful lot of feeling came through in it


Re: like the girl (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 03:07:02 AM AEST
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you really put a lot into this. very powerful thoughts.


Re: like the girl (User Rating: 1 )
by wild_heart_of_fire on Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 03:11:52 AM AEST
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very powerful. very deep. this is different than most of the other poems i have read by other people. you have a gift.




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