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Array ( [sid] => 141592 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Happy Child [time] => 2008-04-14 23:12:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Its unlikely we will stay in touch
Voices cant travel this far
Hands don’t reach across oceans of time
Within your heart-
You will no longer find mine

I chased you from place to place
For months and months
I made you believe in me
I left you no choice but to fall in love

Little did I know
Love cant be forced
Lust cant be taught
And togetherness cant be bought
Feelings of forever
Hopeless and lost
Too many things to say
Too many nights awake and tossed

I miss you desperately
Maybe one day Ill tell you how much
I would take you back
I would make you mine all over again
If in you-
I could trust
The concept of us
Seems to have dissipated into dust
When all we do is argue
All we do is-
Not love

The taste of your skin
Still remains
The smell of your hair
Still brings rain
The moment of despair
In visions of you-
When you aren’t there
Causes my soul
To loose all control
and I fight back the tears
when I should just let them all go

The funny thing is
There is no fixing all of this
There is no answer
To the riddle that never was
There is no change
Nothing ever does
We will stay the same
Feel free to blame
Me-
For this misery
Me-
For all you could not see
Me-
I am the reason for this pain

So separate ways
We must part
So many days
An end before a true start
So many ways
We could have tried
So there is nothing left to say
Nothing left, but-
Goodbye


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_____ [comments] => 2 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 43 [informant] => jyssvw [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Happy Child

Contributed by jyssvw on Monday, 14th April 2008 @ 11:12:23 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Its unlikely we will stay in touch
Voices cant travel this far
Hands don’t reach across oceans of time
Within your heart-
You will no longer find mine

I chased you from place to place
For months and months
I made you believe in me
I left you no choice but to fall in love

Little did I know
Love cant be forced
Lust cant be taught
And togetherness cant be bought
Feelings of forever
Hopeless and lost
Too many things to say
Too many nights awake and tossed

I miss you desperately
Maybe one day Ill tell you how much
I would take you back
I would make you mine all over again
If in you-
I could trust
The concept of us
Seems to have dissipated into dust
When all we do is argue
All we do is-
Not love

The taste of your skin
Still remains
The smell of your hair
Still brings rain
The moment of despair
In visions of you-
When you aren’t there
Causes my soul
To loose all control
and I fight back the tears
when I should just let them all go

The funny thing is
There is no fixing all of this
There is no answer
To the riddle that never was
There is no change
Nothing ever does
We will stay the same
Feel free to blame
Me-
For this misery
Me-
For all you could not see
Me-
I am the reason for this pain

So separate ways
We must part
So many days
An end before a true start
So many ways
We could have tried
So there is nothing left to say
Nothing left, but-
Goodbye


_________
_____




Copyright © jyssvw ... [ 2008-04-14 23:12:23]
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Re: Happy Child (User Rating: 1 )
by xoBrokenxo on Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 12:20:26 PM AEST
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Very sad, but I really liked it. Great write.


Re: Happy Child (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Wednesday, 16th April 2008 @ 04:51:10 AM AEST
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very sad but awsome write.




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