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Night Sun
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Monday, 14th April 2008 @ 04:33:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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The night sun burns bright this evening
as it watches us dance in the rain
We pick its fruits
and share its bounty
as we embrace its cold, crystal air
It sparkles in our eyes
with every longing gaze
and fills the air
between every soft kiss
It opens up the darkness
so we can live as kings
owning the world around us
freeing us from the burdens of man
and the inhibitions of mortal life
It gives us
two hopeless lovers
a place to call our own
as the rest of the world
cools in the shroud of darkness
and slumbers the hours away
The night sun is our sun
It asks for nothing
It takes nothing
Instead offering us a place to dance
hand in hand
until the morning comes
Watching us with misty tears
that turn to dew as they touch the grass
beneath the feet of two hopeless lovers
who are finding one another
in a clearing of darkness
made by the smiling face of the nighttime sun
and owned for a moments eternity
by two lovers dancing
in the cold midnight rain
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MajesticPoet
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Re: Night Sun
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by hostile_waffle on
Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 08:28:42 AM AEST
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| It's lovely! I like the two words 'midnight rain' together. Very nice! |
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Re: Night Sun
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by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 11:16:36 AM AEST
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A masterful piece of writing. Great job.
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