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Array ( [sid] => 14150 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => This Man I Hate [time] => 2003-03-12 12:00:00 [hometext] => a super little ditty about the wretched individual whom i loathe more than all the other denizens of this earthly hell. [bodytext] => i'm staring at the man that i hate
and he's staring back at me
well, he's not really a man
just a pathetic boy
nothing more

i'm glaring at this man that i hate
and he's glaring back at me
his every word, is a hollow lament
his eyes, deep pools of self-pity

i'm seething with rage at this man that i hate
and he's seething right back at me
this useless blob
this hideous freak
i wonder if he thinks the same of me

i'd love to kill this man that i hate
and i bet he'd like to kill me
just blow off his head
or slit his ***** throat
just to finally be free

i'm ruining the life of this man that i hate
and he is ruining mine
our words and actions
all just to spite one other
each just waiting for the other to die

i tried to punch this man i hate
and he tried to punch me back
my fist hit his and the mirror shattered
hiding his monstrous face

staring at the blood oozing from my fist
i see that monstrous face
i see that laughing face
I HATE THAT ***** FACE

i'm a slave to this man, this man that i hate
but, he's not a slave to me
i'll never get rid of this man that i hate
this man will get rid of me [comments] => 4 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
This Man I Hate

Contributed by Cancer on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



i'm staring at the man that i hate
and he's staring back at me
well, he's not really a man
just a pathetic boy
nothing more

i'm glaring at this man that i hate
and he's glaring back at me
his every word, is a hollow lament
his eyes, deep pools of self-pity

i'm seething with rage at this man that i hate
and he's seething right back at me
this useless blob
this hideous freak
i wonder if he thinks the same of me

i'd love to kill this man that i hate
and i bet he'd like to kill me
just blow off his head
or slit his ***** throat
just to finally be free

i'm ruining the life of this man that i hate
and he is ruining mine
our words and actions
all just to spite one other
each just waiting for the other to die

i tried to punch this man i hate
and he tried to punch me back
my fist hit his and the mirror shattered
hiding his monstrous face

staring at the blood oozing from my fist
i see that monstrous face
i see that laughing face
I HATE THAT ***** FACE

i'm a slave to this man, this man that i hate
but, he's not a slave to me
i'll never get rid of this man that i hate
this man will get rid of me




Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2003-03-12 12:00:00]
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Re: This Man I Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 02:55:45 PM AEST
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wonderful...but so sad...


Re: This Man I Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 03:25:38 PM AEST
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Disturbing very disturbing I liked this I to have felt like puncing that mirror. Great poem buddy.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: This Man I Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 03:27:24 AM AEST
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..........wow..........


Re: This Man I Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by mystical_illusion on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 06:43:46 PM AEST
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Again, i know this poem was written along toime ago but yeah...
I liked this poem and have been there many times
-kelly




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