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You broke a thousand hearts
on your way to mine
you tore through a thousand lonely souls
and shattered a thousand dreams
before a twist of fate
brought you to my door

Now you’ve moved on
following the scent of loneliness
down a trail of desperation
to another victim
one who smiles unaware
just like I did in the months before

But time will be kind to me
as it is to most gentle souls
though we break like twigs
in the howling winds of today
the rains of tomorrow make us strong
and let us grow into a forest that can never be broken

You will remain hollow, empty and weak
even as I grow stronger
and some day love will find you
following the scent of your loneliness
and it will break you with ease
a rotten tree falling to a draft

So even as I cry for you
and nurse my broken heart
I offer no words of anger
nor carry any ill desires
For your fate is your own
and destiny spites you enough
while I’ll miss you on lonely nights
I can not hate what I pity so much
nor condem that which has condemned itself
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Frail Destiny

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 10:44:22 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



--------__________-----------

You broke a thousand hearts
on your way to mine
you tore through a thousand lonely souls
and shattered a thousand dreams
before a twist of fate
brought you to my door

Now you’ve moved on
following the scent of loneliness
down a trail of desperation
to another victim
one who smiles unaware
just like I did in the months before

But time will be kind to me
as it is to most gentle souls
though we break like twigs
in the howling winds of today
the rains of tomorrow make us strong
and let us grow into a forest that can never be broken

You will remain hollow, empty and weak
even as I grow stronger
and some day love will find you
following the scent of your loneliness
and it will break you with ease
a rotten tree falling to a draft

So even as I cry for you
and nurse my broken heart
I offer no words of anger
nor carry any ill desires
For your fate is your own
and destiny spites you enough
while I’ll miss you on lonely nights
I can not hate what I pity so much
nor condem that which has condemned itself




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Re: Frail Destiny (User Rating: 1 )
by artjunkiekyle on Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 12:25:43 PM AEST
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oh my word!
most definitely my favorite poem hands down
this flowed so well
especially the last line
how you cultivated a poem of this magnitude is beyond me
what an incredible talent youve got
thankyou for posting
~kyle


Re: Frail Destiny (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 01:15:29 PM AEST
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Written with such wisdom.... although the pain is quite evident, the poem shows your strength and character... Awesome write....Jenni


Re: Frail Destiny (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 03:25:32 PM AEST
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a very powerful passionate painful expressive write here.. this is a wonderful expression of that evil within a person.. such an evil person.. remember what goes around comes around.. this was very wise though..

rock on,

vampyress Jenni


Re: Frail Destiny (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 10:54:12 PM AEST
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Such a powerful yet comforting write. Hold your head up high. My congratulations to you.

Deadwriter


Re: Frail Destiny (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Friday, 11th April 2008 @ 02:14:49 AM AEST
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This is truly, a beautiful read; you've lived up to your name, MajesticPoet, indeed! Thank you,

Tuesday x




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