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Array ( [sid] => 141493 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I will not be - the prophecy [time] => 2008-04-10 05:43:27 [hometext] => ... [bodytext] => I am scattered between two loves
i am scattered between no love
i am scattered in the nothingness
that a love passing by has left
I am going nowhere
i am walking through the debris
of broken dreams and promises
and broken ideals
and i am wondering
if all these pieces will ever unite
to form a whole of me again

You are scattered between a thousand worlds
When you go there, you'll keep a part of me with you
like the million you s that i met
but when you will return
i will not be
You will take your bags and your books
your dreams and my heart in a plane
You'll be counting seven seconds and seven nights
untill the moon will come to stab your soul in death
and bleeding you will return
but i will not be
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 6 [informant] => an3n [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

I will not be - the prophecy

Contributed by an3n on Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 05:43:27 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I am scattered between two loves
i am scattered between no love
i am scattered in the nothingness
that a love passing by has left
I am going nowhere
i am walking through the debris
of broken dreams and promises
and broken ideals
and i am wondering
if all these pieces will ever unite
to form a whole of me again

You are scattered between a thousand worlds
When you go there, you'll keep a part of me with you
like the million you s that i met
but when you will return
i will not be
You will take your bags and your books
your dreams and my heart in a plane
You'll be counting seven seconds and seven nights
untill the moon will come to stab your soul in death
and bleeding you will return
but i will not be

Copyright © an3n ... [ 2008-04-10 05:43:27]
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Re: I will not be - the prophecy (User Rating: 1 )
by artjunkiekyle on Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 10:37:06 AM AEST
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angst portrayed
powerful ending
perhaps (though im not quite sure) this is a way of moving on for you
i think you've succeeded in making a splendid poem
thanks for posting
~kyle

Re: I will not be - the prophecy (User Rating: 1 )
by an3n on Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 03:10:42 AM AEST
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thnk you:)

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