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Breathing in the scent of your hair
Gentle touch lingering on the skin
Let me savor this moment
As your eyes shine
With the light of the setting sun
As it caresses you
And makes you glow
Smile for me
So that I might remember joy
And the way my heart skips a beat
Each time you glance at me
From beneath dark lashes
My Carissima
You make me feel alive
But the sun is setting on us
And soon the light will be gone
And I will be left alone

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Carissima

Contributed by true on Wednesday, 9th April 2008 @ 08:33:27 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Oh to be near you
Breathing in the scent of your hair
Gentle touch lingering on the skin
Let me savor this moment
As your eyes shine
With the light of the setting sun
As it caresses you
And makes you glow
Smile for me
So that I might remember joy
And the way my heart skips a beat
Each time you glance at me
From beneath dark lashes
My Carissima
You make me feel alive
But the sun is setting on us
And soon the light will be gone
And I will be left alone

Copyright © true ... [ 2008-04-09 08:33:27]
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Re: Carissima (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 08:31:27 AM AEST
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I was'nt quite ready for that ending.
The way that you left alone as the last
word and then nothing more was effective
at giving me a sense of that loneliness.
I don't know if you intended it that way but
it worked well none the less. I enjoyed it .
It's good to see you writing again.
truly , doug

Re: Carissima (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 06:29:12 AM AEST
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A very touching write.

Best I can muster right now is to echo what Doug said.

Keep writing ...

Peace

~Shannon

Re: Carissima (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 31st May 2008 @ 01:55:30 PM AEST
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I ditto above comments.
Nicely done. The ending got me a good one.

Michelle

Re: Carissima (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 04:06:26 PM AEST
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You have a really good flare for great imagery. This is really beautiful and a tad sad at the end there. I like it.

Thank you,

Tim

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